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Comments for 'Banserki's Journal (Part 10): Attacked' |
someguY
7:20 am | January 4, 2003
that was cool
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ThreadedAce3
4:16 pm | January 3, 2003
Sarge, i liked this piece. considering that you havent wrote for a while, i thought that it was well written. good job.
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Sarge
3:06 pm | January 3, 2003
Yes the effects of not writing first person in many months. Oh well thanks for the good feedback erm I think KNightmares is good ;).
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Wado
5:46 am | January 3, 2003
Go Sarge! Hey I liked the story. The descriptions were nice and it seemed to flow nicely.
The only thing I thought might be improved was to not to start as many sentences with the pronoun "I". No biggy though.
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Knightmare(MM
10:02 pm | January 2, 2003
Mmmm... I like it. . . Eat... Floodies... Breakfast... Mmm...
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Mutated Elite
5:39 pm | January 2, 2003
I haven't seen another piece in a long time... good job!
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