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Comments for 'All Roads Lead To Sol...Despite What The Map Says: Chapter 10'



Jinkaiden-XI
10:30 pm | August 15, 2003
Very good.

I noticed your e-mail address, and so I guess you really are from England...

That's cool. I like English writers. Anyway, back to the matter at hand. I like your writing, and this chapter was great. But if this is half of Section 2, and there will be Section 3, 4, and 5, then..well, whoa...

Good job, 10/10

Jinkaiden-XI
S7N
8:18 am | August 14, 2003
well i;m making it into around the length that The Flood and Fall of Reach are. believe it or not, we're only about half way through Section 2, and there are three more sections to come as well, i got some very cool things lined up for you guys.
Kaboose
2:51 am | August 14, 2003
It was great!! 10/10
Question..how many parts do you plan to have for this story?
JCDenton
9:48 pm | August 13, 2003
Nice!

this idea of you, and the whole thing in the story, like this return of bradley, I must say, its great. you earned a nice numbre... ubt be sure to check myh story ;)

10/10 you get from me!

JCDenton
Creator Of Halo: The MCconto Chronicles series ©
Jackal Jak
9:41 pm | August 13, 2003
Damn, I never would have thought that it was gonna be him! Great job!
umyaho
9:07 pm | August 13, 2003
good twist
S7N
5:24 pm | August 13, 2003
it was the same length as the others, two and a half pages
Elfster
5:09 pm | August 13, 2003
lol, well, I never saw that comin. great chapter as always =) But it was too short I thought
S7N
4:24 pm | August 13, 2003
yeh, i nearly killed myself when you put that comment up sayin "its bradley!"
Agent Shade
4:21 pm | August 13, 2003
i knew it! it was Bradley, hahahaha. no complaints, good plot twist here S7N 10/10


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