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Comments for 'All Roads Lead To Sol...Despite What The Map Says: Chapter 8'



grylsy
7:21 am | August 3, 2003
man i miss a few chapters and i still keep up with the storyline man that rokcs... and you guys see the seven day polla bout the gay sayings of the techs in halo? the worst one i've ever heard was when i killed a techa dn the tech next to him said "i wanna dye! kill me too!"
'Nosolee
4:46 pm | August 1, 2003
I'm definetly going with Desert Fox and Agent Shade on that guess about the mystery spec ops guy.
JCDenton
2:24 pm | August 1, 2003
good job man nice story. be sure to get a lot of freedom in your story, like 20 years after Halo 2 or something, just like I did. that is why I have the opportunity to get one of the best story's. good luck man. you want extra nice names for ships, battleships, destroyers, planets, I GOT THEM!! just be sure to email me!

MCJCD@hotmail.com
S7N
1:48 pm | August 1, 2003
well guys, there are some good guesses there, and i am pissed off to say that one of them is bang on! so you will find out who is right when the next two or three chapters come out.

and, no Harris isnt up to anything, he's just finally realised that Manny isnt a bad guy, and vice versa

or does he?

LOL! kidding
controlled chaos
5:51 am | August 1, 2003
This fanfiction series is among the best I've read since I started reading them here. I was going to post one of my fanfics that I wrote, but it was pretty crappy,plus, halfway through the first chapter,I got writers block. I like reading more than writing,anyway. 10/10....You have a fan now...kepp up the good stories!
Agent Shade
2:38 am | August 1, 2003
desert fox that is such a good guess, i'm going along with him
Desert Fox
2:04 am | August 1, 2003
Well I must say that this is an excellant story and series. As for the name the spec ops contest, I'm going to throw in my two cents and say that our friendly jungle fiend is Manny's lost brother, Brad I think was his name. Seems to work that his ship was shot down and that our spec ops appeared from a escape pod, and that Manny's brother was skilled and decorated. Heck, its always possible.
Berconius
1:05 am | August 1, 2003
...

wow man, that's kind low, isn't it?

...But than again, I might be S7N in the guise of Berconius....oo, tricky...

Just playing with you guys, I'm the real Berconius.

A note to S7N: What the heck is Harris up to? My 666th sense tells me that he's up to no good. Maybe something to make manny really REALLY hate him?

Well, I'll put in my guess for the mystery killer. I don't know who tucker is since my modem is too slow to Download Redvs.Blue movies before getting booted off the internet, so I wouldn't know what that joke is. I guess it's some special race. Slim chance of being a Brute or a renegade Elite. I would think that it's possibly another races like Forerunner or something.

Keep it up, the mystery and the personal development of the Characters is very good.

9/10
The One
9:36 pm | July 31, 2003
wow! great story!
S7N
9:36 pm | July 31, 2003
LOL!!! btw. The One is me, i'm just testing things out. god for all you guys know, these comments could all be from me, just using random names!
S7N
7:15 pm | July 31, 2003
no, i never got round to watching them, but yes, now you have said Red vs Blue i know who you are talking about
Wiley K.
6:59 pm | July 31, 2003
Never seen RedvsBlue?

That episode was hilarius.
My fravorite part was this:
"It was 4 shots, like... BAM BAM BAM."
"Dude, that was only 3 bams."
"...BAM"
S7N
6:54 pm | July 31, 2003
whose tucker?
Ishkabibbl
6:48 pm | July 31, 2003
Then its an obvious answer, TUCKER!
S7N
6:36 pm | July 31, 2003
as i hve said i was away for two weeks in Tenerife, so it wasnt THAT long. i aint just bashin these chapters out as if they dont mean anything, i'm taking my time. this aint gonna be a short thing, professional writing is my hobby.

and, no it aint a Spartan. did you not read what teh Elites said? he wore black, not Green armour
Wiley
6:32 pm | July 31, 2003
Sarge, Mendoza, Bisenti...
Elfster
5:51 pm | July 31, 2003
Lol it's pretty obvious its a spartan. The first one who comes to mind is MC but I'm not sure about it yet.

It took so long for this to come about I thought you died or something =P

10/10
scope
5:13 pm | July 31, 2003
10/10 I love it,bout time it came out.
S7N
5:08 pm | July 31, 2003
well, evidentally, he IS spec ops, i dont think a basic grunt would be able to do that

what i mean is WHO is he? what relation do you reckon he'll have with the story and the characters?
Wiley K.
4:30 pm | July 31, 2003
Spec Ops?
10/10
S7N
3:16 pm | July 31, 2003
i do indent when i right. in fact the whole i set out as it is in the two Halo novels. the only annoying thing is when i cut and paste it over here it screws it all up, and when i try and indent and put tabs in, it doesnt do it.

and dont worry, the identity of the secret warrior will be revealed soon, but before they are, any guesses as to who it might be?
Agent Shade
2:56 pm | July 31, 2003
god i'm so tired...you might WANT to indent whenever someone talks*****

sorry
Agent Shade
2:54 pm | July 31, 2003
this is my fav series hands down S7N, i just wish they came in more faster...wonder who that warrior was who was taking out the covenant...and as for grammar/spelling mistakes, i didn't see any, but you might one to indent whenever someone talks, might make it easier to read

keep it up dude, i need more 10/10
'Nosolee
1:03 pm | July 31, 2003
Awesome, I was waiting for another All Roads Lead to Sol installment. 10/10
S7N
11:29 am | July 31, 2003
sorry Part 8 took so long to put up guys, but i hadnt finished it properly and i just spent two weeks sunning it up with the lads in tenerife.
there are a few spelling mistakes in there which i didnt stop till i submitted it, but hey, we're not perfect!

enjoy!
nicholas
11:09 am | July 31, 2003
Cool!


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