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Comments for 'All Roads Lead To Sol...Unless Stated Otherwise: Chapter 1'



Steele
8:06 pm | June 16, 2003
Okay, I'll paste it to word and format it to Double Space then read it, then come back here and tell ya what I think.
Wiley
1:55 am | June 16, 2003
Too bad Steele, you're missing a good story.
Steele
9:36 pm | June 15, 2003
I must say, I took one look and didn't read it. You need to formatt it. It's alright if you don't indent, but you could have put a space between each paragraph. I didn't read it 'cause I have bad eyes and straining to read that just hurts 'em.


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