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Comments for 'The Revelations of War, Prologue: Part III' |
Berconius
5:58 pm | July 17, 2004
You are a newb, nota n00b. that is my honest answer.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:00 am | July 16, 2004
Wow, really cool. I've got to read the other series, then. I'll post comments in them after I'm done.
Great job, russ.
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romac1991
10:30 am | July 16, 2004
Great story, the next Wado. Oh yeah, I'm gonna ask an honest question and I want an honest answer.
Am I a n00b/newb?
romac1991
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Pho
1:10 am | July 16, 2004
so yah i read "Discovery of an Enemy" like u suggested. my conclusion?
that's just SICK man. plain SICK. no one should be writing stories that good. holy crap that was one of the best stories i've read in my life.
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Severian
12:52 am | July 16, 2004
I have some catchup reading to do...
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russ687
8:36 pm | July 15, 2004
AN ANNOUNCEMENT TO READERS:
The next chapter is coming out, but I must warn you it is assumed that you have read the previous series (Discovery of an Enemy). So when it comes out, if you have not read that series, please don't ask what is going on and what happened before Reach fell.
"Complicated and Comprehensive sotry-lines." That's my motto.
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Pho
6:05 am | July 15, 2004
::twitch:: this is...gooooooooood...i'm gonna go read it again.
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thedarkfire
4:51 pm | July 14, 2004
must...have...more!
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Sebastian Crontooch
12:41 pm | July 14, 2004
Very good story! I am actually looking forward to reading a fanfic for the first time since I found Dispraiser's "Fall of Lunar IV", or something like that. The one with the marine that stays behind on the evacuation... (It was that one guy! You know, with the pants, and the hair...) Anyway, you did a very good job of describing the space battle. Anyone with an imagination can enjoy the view.
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Helljumper
11:51 am | July 14, 2004
The reason i stopped writing it was because I wrote out like the next two chapters and I tied it into my first series Battle for Tectron, but then it got deleted and I didn't want to sit down and write it all again cause i didn't remember much of it. I say we use that as our colaboration after we finnish our respect series.
ODST
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KilltheMonitor
5:54 am | July 14, 2004
i thought it was a good story but im not into that space battle, whats your opion on space battles russ
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russ687
5:06 am | July 14, 2004
After were finish our current series? Shit, you know I dont write short stories; what's the timeline here? Start Winter 2005...?
Do you have MSN instant messanger? Get in contact with me via that or at least email; make sure you identify yourself. And if I don't respond, it probably means it got lost in junk mail, so tell me via posting here.
God, I'm bored. Can anyone start an argument with me? Please? Where's the drama? The mad posting back and forth to prove a point? Oh well...
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Berconius
3:38 am | July 14, 2004
Well done, well done. I'm not normally one for all author created characters, but you got me on this one. Good job.
9/10
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The Collector
10:55 pm | July 13, 2004
Very Very Very good. Hopefully you guys can have a good colabo and get a long running story going.
Gimme More
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russ687
8:47 pm | July 13, 2004
I just read it; sheesh, my Pologue is longer then your first three chapters, is that bad? Maybe my goal is to throw so many words out at the readers that I'm bound to get something right :)
Makes me wonder what would happen if my ODST platoon just happened to run to this Lt. Davis' platoon.
It was really good, but why did you stop? March 2004 is not that long ago...
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Helljumper
8:35 pm | July 13, 2004
Hey russ did you ever read my unfinnished series ODST Lead the Way, tell me what you thing in this comment page.
ODST
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Spacefan
7:55 pm | July 13, 2004
I can hardly contain myself. Terrific story!
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Helljumper
7:08 pm | July 13, 2004
I feel like a crackhead for this story. I need more or or or I'll go crazy. Can't wait to see how this goes.
ODST
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No one
6:00 pm | July 13, 2004
More more more more plz. Awesome writing and plot. More more more more.
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Snowy Duck
4:53 pm | July 13, 2004
nice linking between the stories
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