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Comments for 'The Revelation of War, Prologue: Part II' |
Red Ghost
2:38 am | July 16, 2004
It keeps on getting better and better and better...
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CoLd BlooDed
10:51 pm | July 15, 2004
Wow, I never thought I'd get this sidetracked and not read the second part directly after the third. Anyways...
This one was just as good, the space battle and dialogue was realistic. I could just imagine if this was a movie... the possible camera angles... the appearances of the ships and surroundings... this is what I do when I read stories. If I can visualize, the person has done an extremely good job.
So, russ, you have done an extremely great job. ;P Keep it up.
Onto the next chapter!
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Sebastian Crontooch
12:30 pm | July 14, 2004
Coming from you, that's not much in the way of praise.
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Helljumper
11:54 am | July 14, 2004
wow devoted your lives, that serious commitment but not needed to write a good story. Shit I have a life.
ODST
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KilltheMonitor
5:49 am | July 14, 2004
thanks, and like i said, im going to start cidiciting instead of writting(i gusse its not im me o well) but thanks for the help though.
so far your work is terricfic compared to other fanfic
9.6/10
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russ687
5:09 am | July 14, 2004
No hard feelings, bro.
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KilltheMonitor
10:46 pm | July 13, 2004
Hey,
I wanted to say, I'm truly sorry for what I said earlier on my bros fanfic, its just that it was both of our first stories, and we were hoping it would be good because we have both devoted our lives to Halo and the books and everthing else. I wish I could broadcast this applogy to more people, but I guess your the only one it matters to. Please forgive me for what I said. Do you have any advise for Chp.2 of my story? I've read the books and beat the game on xbox, so do you have anymore advise?
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Elitehunter676
10:08 pm | July 13, 2004
Sorry russ. If you haven't read my post on my fanfic. then I apologize for my brothers behavior, he didn't do it with my permission. And thank you for the help. Could you maybe help my brother if you aren't still P.O.'d at him. He could use it. He just took the comments a little to seiously. Thanks again.
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Elitehunter676
9:20 pm | July 13, 2004
Wow! Very nice, I'm impressed. I love how you stick to the facts layed down in the books and such. Nice.
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Helljumper
6:59 pm | July 13, 2004
Nice space battle.I love your writing, it catches you and you want to read it to the end.
ODST
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