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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Chapter Eight' |
CoLd BlooDed
11:11 am | July 16, 2004
Yeah, really good one. Very long, but as soon as I got reading I couldn't stop. The dialogue between the Major and Captain was very well thought out, and it dug into their characters even more than it had. I loved it. Great job.
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Helljumper
6:57 pm | July 10, 2004
The plot is very well thoughtout. A few grammer mistakes, oh and Captain and Major are capitalized.
good one russ
ODST
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Ajax
4:59 pm | July 10, 2004
Sweetness. Interesting. I liked it, but they made it out fairly easily. I would have liked to see them survive by the hair of their asses - more suspense.
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russ687
2:24 pm | July 10, 2004
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