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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Chapter Six: Part II'



CoLd BlooDed
1:23 am | July 16, 2004
Wow, this series is just... wow. Russ, you are a great writer, and I'm gonna finish off this series in the next twenty minutes or so. I'll tell you what I think in your next chapter of your new series.
Sgt. R@aptor
1:48 am | June 30, 2004
9/10 Nice work
Guardian
4:08 pm | June 29, 2004
Cool, i was just wondering nothing bummed out about.

Its not jumbled up as other fic's i've read.

Your fics are quite interesting and keep the readers waiting for the next one. Keep them coming
Pvt. Tucker
11:47 am | June 29, 2004
That story was really long, i only made it to ch3 pt3 and thought that it was very good, someday ill read the rest. There were some grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but it was also very detailed and interesting, keep it up. This fan fic was definetely better than most others out there, keep it up. 9.5/10 ;)
russ687
1:26 am | June 29, 2004
ahhh, the code. Yes I do know it, and no, I'm not trying to be rebelous...jk

When I started the series I didn't know it, so for the sack of fromat uniformity, the series will be completed like this. I hope this doesn't bum anyone out, but it makes sense to me.

The next series will be done by the code, rest assured...
Guardian
1:15 am | June 29, 2004
Its really good, i'm just puzzled about why you don't use the code, thats all. Otherwise its great. 10/10
Helljumper
12:57 am | June 29, 2004
That was good, loving this series.

ODST
russ687
8:53 pm | June 28, 2004
Please post comments.

Special Note: Last Chapter had many errors on it. My apologies to all readers. I hope this chapter makes up for it.


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