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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Chapter Five: Part II'



CoLd BlooDed
1:08 am | July 16, 2004
Wow, this was really cool. You could've checked over your story one last time because there were some spelling mistakes, but nothing to out of wack.

This is getting really mysterious. I mean, booby-traps, deserted Covenant encampment, Elite ghosts... what's going to happen?
Elitehunter676
7:46 pm | July 13, 2004
Nicely written and highly detailed, good work. And when you commented on mine what code's are you talking about? Keep up the good work.

-Halo Rules!
Elitehunter676
7:46 pm | July 13, 2004
Nicely written and highly detailed, good work. And when you commented on mine what code's are you talking about? Keep up the good work.

-Halo Rules!
Darkhammered
1:37 pm | July 13, 2004
Next one plz
russ687
5:11 am | June 28, 2004
It all depends.

*Question for anyone who reads old posts*

Do you like longer chapters? (Comes out when finished).

Or do you like short chapters? (Comes out peridically).

So far it has been the first, but if its easy to follow the other way, please tell me.

Oh yeah, Helljumper: Come out with a another series!
Darkhammered
7:06 pm | June 26, 2004
That was awesome. No complaints here buddy. Btw, any idea when the next one comes out?
Helljumper
7:12 pm | June 24, 2004
Those creatures seem to easy to kill. From the first time you described them, It almost killed the El-tee. But the story is good and keeps you interesting. I doubt that he would have gone down the hole by himself and then explore like that by himself. At least one more person. But do you. its good.

ODST
russ687
5:31 pm | June 24, 2004
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