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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Chapter Two: Part I' |
CoLd BlooDed
11:11 am | July 16, 2004
The action was impressive, and I liked the abrupt chaotic moment where the Marines were confused by what was going on. Good.
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romac1991
5:20 am | May 30, 2004
Good...Very very very good
9.8/10
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russ687
3:30 pm | May 26, 2004
The second chapter was already written at the time of my posting of the first chapter, but as I contine to write, I'm looking more at some other OSDT or Marine stories to see how they are written.
PS. I will be posting now on the "Part III" section.
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Helljumper
2:42 pm | May 26, 2004
Good, really good. I like how you did the action and describle everything. Thanx for describing your new gun. My only problem is "suppressive fire", i think you meant suppressing fire, but thats a small point. I'll like to see where this story is going.
ODST
PS How much did or do I influence you and your story.
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