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Comments for 'Through the eyes of cannon fodder: Part 2'



MasterGrunt
9:16 pm | September 20, 2003
Not so fast, you could have written two chapters on them taking the bease. You also need to explain more.
MasterGrunt
9:16 pm | September 20, 2003
Not so fast, you could have written two chapters on them taking the bease. You also need to explain more.
MasterGrunt
9:16 pm | September 20, 2003
Not so fast, you could have written two chapters on them taking the bease. You also need to explain more.
Alpha Lance
9:39 pm | September 16, 2003
Wow that was short, maybe you should make it longer next time, and chop up the paragraphs.


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