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Comments for 'Project Spartan III pt. 3: It's Rosted Grunts and Jackles Time'



Guardian
4:14 am | June 26, 2004
how can there be Spartan III's without the fall of ths Spartan II's or the Fall of Spartan 117 after his last victory that greeted him with an honorful death?


Didn't get the last half either.
Grunty Thirst
2:33 am | June 23, 2004
No clue what the 2nd half talked about but it wasnt alll that bad. Some underdetailed things and lots of errors (spelling), keep it up.



* 8.3/10
Mainevent
1:41 am | June 23, 2004
www.dictionary.com

www.thesaurus.com

For the lazy ones.
Señor El Robot-o
1:01 am | June 23, 2004
U SUCK BALLS!
row jerles
7:55 pm | June 22, 2004
god i so sorry guys. i guess i'm just too lazy to get up and get a dictionary. as for the last half.... well.... i dont know what went wrong, but maybe the next one will clear things up a bit.
i need to find a name
1:59 pm | June 22, 2004
ya its a good story but you need to tell us were its going. and i didnt really understand the last half. but otherwise keep it up
Sean
6:47 pm | June 21, 2004
Um I really don't like where this is going. I mean it's a fine story but where it's going is nowhere.
Señor El Robot-o
4:39 pm | June 21, 2004
I didn't even bother to try to read your story. You know why? You misspelled "Roasted" and "Jackals". Spell check is your other friend.
romac1991
11:18 am | June 21, 2004
..didn't really understand the last half...

romac1991


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