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Comments for 'A Sight for Sore Eyes (Redone)'



MC's Cousin
6:25 pm | June 15, 2004
Oh, and:

That "or else" bit refers to the battering you will receive from readers like me.

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MC's Cousin
6:23 pm | June 15, 2004
someone tell me how hard it is to click on something that you were told to click on "or else" in bold print.

That reminds me of my job at a ski lodge where people woule never EVER bother to put the ski sticks (like my terms?) back where they belong. They would throw them on the ground six inches away. Arggg...

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Solidus Snake
4:37 pm | June 15, 2004
Okay, since you never bother to click the little hyper link called, "Direction for Use" I'll just give you the link myself, dur.

http://halosn.bungie.org/misc/ffformdirections.html

Copy and paste that link and it will take you to a page that tells what is require and such. And near the bottom is the "Pseudocode". Ta daaa.
Nick Kang
12:20 pm | June 15, 2004
I feel like I am taking crazy pills.


That is all.

NK
Ross_Blam-
12:14 pm | June 15, 2004
Ya sorry about the grammer issues and run one sentences. I new to this type of thing, but ill do better on the next one. And what are you guys talking about when you talk about THE CODE. What is it?
MC's Cousin
3:59 pm | June 14, 2004
Damn, I love that little corner pic of the MC booting' 343GS into the dunny and...

*ehem* Oh. Well, I can't say tha I read your first one. And it seams that 343SB below me said everything worth saying about this one.
But he did forget something. You did too. You both forgot about THE CODE. I have yet to read a story this post with the code in it. Guess I'll have'ta keep lookin'.

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343 Salty Beans
12:39 am | June 14, 2004
You did a good persona of Sarge, despite a few chinks. However, your grammar was lackluster, and a few run-on sentences ruined a some otherwise good battle scenes. You also needed a little more of a conclusion. It just seems like a skirmish, and that's it (not like there's nothing wrong with a good old blood n' guts testosterone-rush battle scene).

343SB


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