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Comments for 'ODST Saga: Chapter 2'

7:17 pm | April 9, 2002
ya that sounds like a pretty good idea to me, maybe we get re-enforced by a platoon on marines while we're pinned down or something like that. thanks for the idea.
1:14 am | April 9, 2002
I like this chapter very nice, One thing though why dont you make a very large battle with more then one unit of men (later on of course) it would add a nice touch but you dont have to listen to me its just a suggesttion
12:43 am | April 9, 2002
ok here is the next 2 chapters (they got condensed into one since chapter 3 wasnt long enough by itself)if you want, you can e-mail me suggestions (robo42786@AOL.com) and if they sound good to me ill add them in my next chapter and give you credit for the ideas. Thanks!