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Comments for 'The Lost Away Man' |
saturn
8:33 am | July 20, 2002
Gruntmeat could be a perfect compliment of fish, perhaps an elegant garnish? Naww, gruntjerky.
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Arch
10:53 pm | July 19, 2002
The imitation potatoes are better than what us Canadians get. We STILL know what to do with all the parts of the buffalo. But Gruntmeat? Nah, we don't know what the hell to do with that stuff.
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Vegeta
6:59 pm | July 18, 2002
Make that four things.
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Nike
3:57 pm | July 18, 2002
Plus it seemed rushed.
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Vegeta
11:18 am | July 18, 2002
Nike is right on the three things he mentioned.
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Spartan415
8:51 pm | July 17, 2002
I made up the covenant meat thing and make this longer. it would make a good prolougue.
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Nike
11:20 am | July 17, 2002
Why not, saturn.
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saturn
1:15 am | July 17, 2002
potatoes. my mom makes latkeys or somethin' like that, hashbrowns, and fries occasionally. They were once the staple diet of europeans and are easy to grow and propigate. In fact, potatoes were once soo heavilly depended on that a bad harvest meant starvation. As an LA Hobo, I would live on ramen and Mc Donold's bucket fries, which is made from "imitation" potatoes. I would spend a portion of my monthly taxpayer aide on food, the rest for shelter or somethin.
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saturn
4:48 am | July 16, 2002
can Mr. flood be a hashbrown?
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Nike
1:30 am | July 16, 2002
By the way, I posted that Potato Flood comment. I don't mean what I say though. Tryin' ta make him feel bad ya know, if it even worked.
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Potato Flood
1:17 am | July 16, 2002
sucks ass...im an ass hole, ass hole i am.
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Arch
10:17 pm | July 15, 2002
they're right, man. You've gotta replay the game, bigtime. Otherwise, keep writing. Don't let us discourage you.
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redblooded
4:26 pm | July 15, 2002
*advice
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redblooded
4:23 pm | July 15, 2002
thanks for the advuce. This was only my first one though. i'll make better ones in the future
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Jason
12:20 pm | July 15, 2002
1) clone? ha, they wouldn't make a clone. plus he still had his synthetic nueral implants in the game2) escape to sigma octanus iv? i don't think a banshee can travel through slipspace alone, and sigma octanus iv is definitly a long ways away, otherwise it would've been mentioned at some point in the game. it's at least not close enough to view the explosionoh, and the Master Chief rescued keyes, he didn't escape. and he met jenkins and mendoza after piloting a covenant dropship to escape with the MC from the T&Rand yeah, you stole the thing about covenant meat
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saturn
5:18 am | July 15, 2002
wonder if he has to cook the meat. Might get a new strain of eschericia coli(i did a science fair thingy on that). Ps; Laser tag addicts are mostly hardcore nerds.
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living_sacrifice86
1:26 am | July 15, 2002
i doubt the flood would make a copy and let the real guy go thats just stupid
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Nike
12:50 am | July 15, 2002
And plus you kinda copied off the Lost Spartan series about the Covenant meat.
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saturn
10:12 pm | July 14, 2002
this would be a good prologue if u want to expand from here. break up things into paragraphs.
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Nike
6:03 pm | July 14, 2002
Oh yeah make more.
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Nike
6:03 pm | July 14, 2002
Could be longer and one other thing: DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT write a big block of text. Read Vector40's articles on writing and file types at zenith.com.
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