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Comments for 'The Raptros Saga: ch.2:' |
someone
12:26 pm | March 8, 2004
original=:)
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Raptros-v75
12:18 pm | March 8, 2004
yes, he is some kind of super soldier
i wrote a chapter this past friday, and i need another storyline
here are 2 email adresses to contact me at
geksliver@msn.com
GekSliver@nyc.rr.com
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Solidus Snake
12:31 pm | March 7, 2004
Wow, this is very wierd and unrealistic, ah ha ha, I like it =D
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Alias
3:36 pm | March 6, 2004
Pretty original, although a bit more action would have made it a lot better. And Raptros must be like, a super-super-super-super-soldier if he can survive that much punishment.
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Dark-NiTe
2:30 am | March 6, 2004
Dude, this is messed up...at least its original.
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The Collector
1:11 am | March 6, 2004
ooohh hummm lol very original story. What is Raptros by the way??
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Awacar
10:43 pm | March 5, 2004
I like this story, because it is original and good. Little unrealistic though, since the massive amounts of bullets fired at Raptros was too massive. Sad, because you didn't make any other major mistakes.
Good story, but I'd advise you to bring your main character to earth, or in this case, as he is a "super-creature", ghost hovering level.
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Raptros-v75
7:32 pm | March 5, 2004
here is my second one
this weekend im going to write a few more chapters and submit them on sunday
it gets better in the next chapter, escpecially if you like matrix-style stunts combined with crazy weapons, unlikely slaughter, and huge battles
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