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Comments for 'Marine Ambush part 1'



screw this
7:48 pm | January 4, 2004
screw this u ppl got no life
Sarge
12:54 pm | October 21, 2002
el_halo_diablo1:08 AM | October 15, 2002am I cool? ;) I want to actually see how Spartan8943 writes, cause thats all he ever says about peoples fan fics is "you spelled although wrong" and crap like that. It's getting annoying lol.

Well then why don't you write a perfect story so he can't complain about anything.

MSS
12:32 pm | October 19, 2002
Pretty good, but could be a lot better. By the way, everyone is new sometime, and you have to get started somewhere. Don't let bad comments get you down. A friend
Anonymous
11:47 am | October 16, 2002
THIS GUY SUCKS! HE DOESN'T HAVE A CLUE ABOUT THIS GAME! I BET HE'S ONLY BEATEN PILLAR OF AUTUMN ON EASY AND GOTTEN KILLED 788 TIMES! HE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Impersonator
11:17 am | October 16, 2002
I think im am seriously gay! I spend all my time trying to make people mad on a fan fic thingy. Wow I'm really gay.
Spartan415 (MM
12:38 am | October 16, 2002
I'm back! hahahahah!(hack)(cough)(gets up, drinks some water)(eats sandwich)"oh, yah" (thud) (groan) (eternal sleep);__-(
Knightmare(MM
12:30 am | October 16, 2002
im back :) haaaa haaaaa haaaaa (hack) (cough) (thud) (groan) (death) :(
Master of the halos
10:57 pm | October 15, 2002
Alex, why are you hanfing around here if you hate halo? It's not our fault. Blame bungie!
Spartan8934
10:50 pm | October 15, 2002
Kyle, "Newbee" Is spelled "Newbie". I'm glad you noticed that. I'm also glad you noticed the typo in "Another". People- please do not get angry over this, I am just doing my duty.
Kyle
10:48 pm | October 15, 2002
Someone's impersonating me! I didn't say that!
Alex Toporovich
10:26 pm | October 15, 2002
You guys are all geeks. Halo can kiss my ass
Kyle
10:15 pm | October 15, 2002
Man this story sucks. This guy is a horrible writer and doesn't know anything about Halo
el_halo_diablo
10:15 pm | October 15, 2002
Please excuse me while I stick a dildo in my pussy.
Anonymous
11:56 am | October 15, 2002
BTW I wasn't talking to you, Kyle. You're cool.
Anonymous
11:54 am | October 15, 2002
GET OUT, YOU FRIGGIN' PATHETIC FREAK! No more newbies! Please!
Kyle
11:54 am | October 15, 2002
Oops. I meant "Not another newbie". This place is getting dangerous with 8934 hanging around
Kyle
11:53 am | October 15, 2002
NOT ANOTHGER NEWBEE
sagadude
10:55 am | October 15, 2002
please, dont post another though.(sorry for doble posting)
sagadude
10:53 am | October 15, 2002
pretty good, should be longer though
Knightmare(MM
1:15 am | October 15, 2002
Okay seriously mimic it's two posts and you're already getting old.
Geshtu
12:48 am | October 15, 2002
"F YOU KILEF YOU TWEAKAND F YOU STAN....Bebe your still cool" -cartmen from the "bebe's boobs" episodesorry i was just reminded of it
el_halo_diablo
12:07 am | October 15, 2002
am I cool? ;) I want to actually see how Spartan8943 writes, cause thats all he ever says about peoples fan fics is "you spelled although wrong" and crap like that. It's getting annoying lol.
Masterchief15
8:58 pm | October 14, 2002
If you have read "Halo The Fall of Reach" You would have known that the Humans have translation gear which is why you can sorta make out what the Elites say in the game. And the Grunts don't speak English they speak there own langauge. Once again the translator chip at work.
el_halo_diablo
8:02 pm | October 14, 2002
well it was small, and immediatly jumped around, and things happened too quick. I want to see more from you!(please just don't try to make an identical one with more detail...please?). Keep it up!
Knightmare(MM
12:43 pm | October 14, 2002
im back :) haaaa haaaaa haaaaa (hack) (cough)(thud) (groan) (death) :(
gruntkiller
12:23 pm | October 14, 2002
pretty good could be longer


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