halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'A Reason To Fight ( I )'



A Fan
12:14 am | July 14, 2004
I like people caught up in the invasion of Earth it's pretty cool
romac1991
12:12 pm | July 13, 2004
actually you werent Dave, there were a few before you. Just a few


romac1991
Phoenix99
1:24 am | July 13, 2004
Sorry Dave, just human.
Dave Luck
5:47 pm | July 12, 2004
Being new is no excuse not to read the GUIDELINES!!

Come on, I was the first newbie to use the code in a first-timer story.

Although it might be a pride-thing to say "The only first-time story that used code" I don't want it to be. I want to see every first timer using the code, proper grammar, and proper formatting.

- Dave.
Severian
2:00 am | July 12, 2004
If you had used the code, and made sure that the paragraphs weren't behemothic chunks of confusion, I'd give you a 8/10. Definitely shows some promise, as long as you learn how to incorporate your own style.

But now, without good formatting it's a 6/10.
Slit Throat
3:23 am | July 11, 2004
Go to the Fan Fiction Submission Form and click where it says 'Directions for Use'. That'll explain what the pseudocode (or 'code') is.

Other than thatů I've seen very few first stories that were that good. Nice job!
Phoenix99
12:16 am | July 11, 2004
Code????? I'm new to the whole fan-fic stuff, so any help of advice would be great. Thanks.
Helljumper
6:18 pm | July 10, 2004
That was really good. I liked the plot of regular people caught up in the invasion of Earth. Just learn to use the code.

ODST


bungie.org
brr!