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Comments for 'Silhouettes (I) -Training-'

Dave Luck
1:50 am | July 18, 2004
I'm not sure Spartans show emotion like that. If they shoot someone, they think, "Right, I've shot him. Now, let's get back to work."

- Dave.
CoLd BlooDed
4:55 pm | July 17, 2004
Cool story, although I'm noticing your not putting punctuation at the end of dialogue... is this on purpose? :\\

Anyways, great job, although short, it's a story that keeps your eyes glued to the screen to see what happens.
11:22 am | July 17, 2004
Ummm that was a real dumb spartan.
8:40 am | July 17, 2004
Maybe it was a dumb spartan, but hey, i was trying to show how good the snipers were.
8:04 am | July 17, 2004
Excellent writing. That WAS a very dumb Spartan, but heck, I use more dumb Spartans than everyone else here combined :)

C.T. Clown
5:13 am | July 17, 2004
Thanks Severian
1:30 am | July 17, 2004
I give thee a slap in the face for a shitty fic, good sir... jk

lol I'm just joking, man. Good story, although I wish that you would write a story about a private sniper in a camouflage gear hunting down hordes of Covenant warriors... [wink, wink]
8:02 pm | July 16, 2004
Did i start a sniper trend and a Force Recon trend. People please I know my story is good and inspiring, but can I finnish it first.


7:05 pm | July 16, 2004
I hope everyone likes it. Please comment!