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Comments for 'The After Halo Chronicles/ Part1/ The Introduction' |
Helljumper
2:31 pm | July 22, 2004
Please stop
ODST
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Jessica
11:58 am | July 22, 2004
Sheesh, does everybody use that excuse that they're new now? Is the N00B Plague spreading?! Is the phrase, "I'm new at this, gimmie a break," Now the Universal HBO N00B Phrase?!
Jess
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343 Salty Beans
6:32 am | July 22, 2004
Code dammit! Code! And what Slit Throat said.
343SB
PS: Think of this as constructive. In what way, I don't know....use your imagination.
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Slayer Boi
5:40 am | July 22, 2004
Meh Average.
Btw when i was here be4 i never submitted a story. i am working on one at last!
Muahahahahaha it is actually pretty crappy i think i would tell ya wut it about but i am very slow at writing it and i dont want my idea taken :(
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Mainevent
4:24 am | July 22, 2004
That's what they all say. I'll believe it when I see it.
Now taking this time for the dramatic plug of my own story:
In the dark void of space, a lone ship finds a derelict ancient ring. Unbeknownst to those aboard, their trials will not only lead to the near destruction of humanity, but perhaps its very salvations.
Affront to a God [Part 3]-On a Fan Fiction Page 2 near you now!
End shameless plug.
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OOwizKid
1:37 am | July 22, 2004
Give me a break guys. Its the first story i wrote for this site and Im still learnin. The spaces I regret though. Sob:( Don't worry I'll fix it up though and Part2 is going to be awesome.
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hunter that dances
1:26 am | July 22, 2004
use the code!! just try and use paragraphs. and if u dont know what the code is, then check out beating a a dead pony
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Elitehunter676
7:28 pm | July 21, 2004
I had the same problem, don't worry. Heck I'm still working on it. To find out about the code go to the fanfic submission form. Where it says read this or else, click. Read it and remeber it and you'll be fine.
Anyway, where did you come up with this. It's very innovative.
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Dave Luck
6:18 pm | July 21, 2004
There's evidently some problems when you don't space out the Paragraphs.
Come on, read the guidelines!
- Dave.
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russ687
3:48 pm | July 21, 2004
Oh God, when will people learn? At least put spaces in between paragraphs and quotations!
As for the story-line, I don't know. I couldn't read it.
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Slit Throat
12:41 pm | July 21, 2004
Read the guidelines!!!
Quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. Covenant, Marine and military ranks should be capitalized.
Use the code and at least read over your story or spell check it before submitting it.
4/10
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