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Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 4- Reunion'



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11:11 am | September 24, 2003
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FOrunnER
2:35 am | September 24, 2003
Again, you are incredibly good for a new writer. Cant really decide on the rating right now, its on the fence between an 8 and a 9.
Alpha Lance
10:15 pm | September 23, 2003
Me likes, 9.5/10. Although, you could chop up the paragraphs alittle more. And remember to star a new paragraph when someone gets done tlkin or someone new talks. But keep up the hard.
snowy_duck
11:02 am | September 23, 2003
hey man i like these, keep going.


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