halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 3- Retaliation'



FOrunnER
3:14 am | September 17, 2003
Like I said on your last one, youre doing very well for a new writer. 9/10
Alpha Lance
12:14 am | September 17, 2003
Yeah and also, great story, 9.8/10. Keep it up ese.
ONI_operative_343
10:53 pm | September 16, 2003
the missing word at the bottom paragraph is vehicle. im sorry; i don't know how i forgot that one.

please, leave advice! its good to know that people read this!
Alpha Lance
9:48 pm | September 16, 2003
What? I didn't cut it off. That doesn't sound right.
Louis Wu
10:51 am | September 16, 2003
Admin note - it came like this; I didn't cut it off.


bungie.org