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Comments for 'The Fall of Fate: Invasion, Part Three(13)'

9:03 pm | October 15, 2003
I meant 'too short'
6:16 am | October 15, 2003
Also, it seemed to move a little rushed-like.

I dunno, it just felt a little different. . .

I also caught some grammar and spelling errors.

Do you have an idea on how long the Fall of Fate series is going to go? It seems to be running down, not counting the length of the newest addition, which did seem to short for a Fall of Fate entry.
6:12 am | October 15, 2003
You changed Wkehu's name to Whehu. . .

;-) 9/10 for making us wait four months.
Frensa Geran
12:56 am | October 14, 2003
'Bout damn time...

;-) 9/10 for shortness.
9:50 pm | October 13, 2003
Glad your back man sweet sweet addition to Fall of Fate a little short but nothing wrong with that. 10/10 no grammer complaints or stuff like that.
12:54 am | October 13, 2003
Wow, it's good to be able to post on my own story again.