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Comments for 'The Fall of Fate: Invasion, Part Two(12)'



LALA
3:41 pm | August 13, 2003
NOSOLEE IS TEH UBERCOOL HALO FANIFIC WRITER! 10/10
MESA GONNA WRITZA MY OWN FANFICS SOON! HOPE YOUS GUYS READ IT! 0.o
Hunter_Killer
1:48 am | August 12, 2003
lol, though there's no need to turn this Comments section into a battleground. Just a note. O=) That's a guy with a halo(Yellow ring over angels) over him, lol.
Hunter_Killer
1:46 am | August 12, 2003
Hawk, go to hell.
Agent Shade
4:05 am | August 6, 2003
praise to the young'uns! hahahaha

cheers
Hunter_Killer
10:17 pm | August 2, 2003
Hmmmm... I like it!
Master_Chief 10101
10:15 pm | August 2, 2003
Man, excellent seiries.

24743565674358325843967560390238534763453258436598436584359743687538643865439487543759843605975367693.6/10

lol.
Steele
3:16 pm | August 2, 2003
Excellent, story, 'Nosolee!
scope
2:49 pm | August 1, 2003
Haha, the eye of a 14 year old prevails.
scope
11:24 am | August 1, 2003
Im sure I was the only one to see it. Its just a little thing.
'Nosolee
11:20 am | August 1, 2003
*April 29, 2548
Desert Fox
3:21 am | August 1, 2003
Once again a great story for an equally impressive series. As for the time traveling, I didn't pick up on it until scope brought it up, though I damn well should have. That said, great job
'Nosolee
9:25 pm | July 31, 2003
SHIT, sorry, should be, whatever they are the most. lol Sorry
pooman
9:20 pm | July 31, 2003
scope has a point, lol, thats funny
scope
8:33 pm | July 31, 2003
ok! Good
scope
8:33 pm | July 31, 2003
I know this is a little thing but ur dates are wrong..
1520 Hours April 29, 2548 (Military Calendar)//In the Docking Bay of Destiny.
And then...
1520 Hours April 19, 2548 (Military Calendar//A Few Meters Above the Ground in Front of Delta Base 148, In the Troop Bay of Dropship Bravo 12.

Did u go back in time? LOL. Just something I caught
Kid Buu
7:33 pm | July 31, 2003
Awsome 10/10
Elfster
6:03 pm | July 31, 2003
I have a feeling that cryo-tube wont be soon forgotten ) And it needed a little more action, otherwise, very good.

9/10
Hawk7886
5:58 pm | July 31, 2003
Yay, Gregory finally got outta that room! Can't wait for part 13. 10/10
'Nosolee
5:36 pm | July 31, 2003
No, the grunt is still there, just wait...
'Nosolee
5:36 pm | July 31, 2003
Oh, and, thanks for the great comments guys. I'll start writing the next one ASAP. To monitor101, what I meant was that its like the things you see exploding all over Earth in the announcement trailer for H2.

The Linda that was in my story was the same Linda that was in the Fall of Reach. Just a little tidbit.

(PS Sorr for such a long comment, but Xvshadow has linked to my stories at his new website at forerunners.org. Its at xvshadow.forerunners.org
scope
5:31 pm | July 31, 2003
10.1/10 This is on of the best storys ever. TO bad u got rid of the grunt....
monitor101
5:27 pm | July 31, 2003
No spelling errors what so ever! Wonderfully crafted and brilliant the only thing that nagged me was that the carrier Judgement its plasma weapons were as strong as a nuke so would they explode likea plasma grenade or just burn like hell? Anyways 10/10 u so cleva!
Agent Shade
4:41 pm | July 31, 2003
no complaints, well done amigo 10/10
Frensa Geran
3:45 pm | July 31, 2003
Excellent Work! 10/10
pooman
12:25 pm | July 31, 2003
sweet! 10/10


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