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Comments for 'Shipmaster [Part II]'



'Nosolee
1:28 am | July 12, 2004
Yes, Sir! I'll get right on it.
Agent Shade
6:12 pm | July 11, 2004
short, yet to the point. please do continue
Nick Kang
12:57 pm | July 11, 2004
Yeah....awesome :)

NK
Awacar
8:06 am | July 11, 2004
I liked the job you did of describing everything, like when you made me see the "umbrella" in front of me. Good work overall.
CoLd BlooDed
7:57 pm | July 10, 2004
Spectacular job, 'Nosolee, but I agree with Helljumper.

Anyways, awesome, I'll be looking for your next one.
Helljumper
5:44 pm | July 10, 2004
Sweet, shouldn't use the word mile in Covenant speech. The words cycle and unit are what they use.

ODST
NightBlade
3:21 pm | July 10, 2004
nice 'Nosolee
'Nosolee
1:53 pm | July 10, 2004
Yay, my story was finally posted!


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