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Comments for 'The Fall of Fate: Exploration'

1:35 pm | June 15, 2003
to gruntkiller, this is part of the fall of fate series, I kinda did say it in the second story, but thanks for the advice
12:07 am | June 15, 2003
interesting. you should of said that augustus was an AI right off the bat (i might of skipped over it) that may confuse some people. also the relations to halo that you put in parenthaseis (i probobly didn't splle it right) got a little annoting at times. the covenant prisoners were a great idea. great story lots of potential
7:35 pm | June 12, 2003
Grunts, aye. Hmm...
Forever Forerunner
4:10 pm | June 12, 2003
Pro:Well, interesting fic I must say, especially with the caged elite and such. The Spartan and his AI are also a good combination that most people look for...

Con: Next time clearly mark who is who... I was confused when it went to Greg to Agustus when there was only one person in the room...

Grade 8/10
Wiley K.
3:43 pm | June 12, 2003
Cool, 9/10
4:48 am | June 12, 2003
Still awesome, yo.
3:21 am | June 12, 2003
great expecially this part
"Hold on now, not so fast. See those holo-pads..."
"Not this again.
"Go press one of the big yellow buttons, that should open the doors," Augustus marked the button with a nav point. Gregory let out a long sigh.
"Damn it. Fine, but if that door blows up in my face like that other thing, we'll either both be dead, or I'll survive, and then I'll crush you," Gregory threatened
2:15 am | June 12, 2003
this is the best freakin fan fiction ive ever read(in a long while at least).
1:19 am | June 12, 2003
9/10 Well here ya go. Cookies cake and all
1:19 am | June 12, 2003
I like ( ) keep using them
1:19 am | June 12, 2003
Have a grunt become a prisoner with the elite, we all love grunts.