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Comments for 'Chapter 3: Behind Enemy Lines'



Alpha Lance
5:00 am | July 27, 2003
Are they on earth or halo.
crashedwarthog
7:42 am | July 24, 2003
and finnaly, this sux
Da Mann
2:15 am | July 19, 2003
Hmmmm. Shouldn't Keyes be playing with his pipe rather than his nose?
pooman
7:01 pm | July 17, 2003
i dunno
Hikaru-119
2:18 pm | July 17, 2003
I am confused by the appearance of Keyes and the Autumn. Then again for just jumping into your little chapter I'd say you've got a good thing going here. Although you should seperate paragraphs when new people are talking, even if it does add to the story's over all Kb size.
Nightblade
2:11 pm | July 17, 2003
thanks.Why doesn't it say the series name instead of 'chapter 3: Behind Enemy Lines'
pooman
12:32 pm | July 17, 2003
cool.10/10


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