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Comments for 'Operation: Stingray Ch. 3: --Desperation pt. 2--'



Nick Kang
11:44 am | April 23, 2004
lol...
CoLd BlooDed
10:12 pm | April 21, 2004
Joking...
BloCoD
12:14 am | April 14, 2004
Hey dude, this was good, but you really need to check out CoLd BlooDed's stuff, he's amazing.
BloCoD
12:14 am | April 14, 2004
Hey dude, this was good, but you really need to check out CoLd BlooDed's stuff, he's amazing.
Nick Kang
11:40 am | April 12, 2004
Wow thanks, guys. This is a huge change compared to my older series, which attracted lots and lots of suggestions and didn't get nearly as good ratings as this series did, as CoLd BlooDed said. So thanks again.
Grey fox
9:41 pm | April 11, 2004
Amazing story, cant wait 4 the next chapter, Pretty intense shit. I thought that they were just as good as the other chapters, keep it up
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Burny
1:03 pm | April 11, 2004
Wow...wow. That was nice. Spectacular job, Nick. Can't wait for teh next one...
Nick Kang
12:09 pm | April 11, 2004
I just finished the next one, it switches a lot between characters, so just a foreword note to not get anoyed.
Awacar
6:45 am | April 11, 2004
Bravo, I'm sorry I haven't read muchof your stuff, Nick, but I'll have to change that after reading this one. Good job!!
CoLd BlooDed
4:21 pm | April 10, 2004
Well, I was referring to the first story that I read. ;)
Nick Kang
4:14 pm | April 10, 2004
I've always been this good, I just never spent enough time on my other stories to add all the detail.
CoLd BlooDed
3:36 pm | April 10, 2004
Great job Nick Kang, the first story of yours (that I read) was a bit choppy and lacked descriptions. You have come a long way in such a short period of time, your detail is better, your flow, your grammar. The only thing I have to suggest is work on the punctuation, I saw a couple places where something didn't fit.

Great job, spectacular, even. Loved it, keep 'em coming. I want to find out what that Marine's plan is! Although I have a "faint" idea. ;)
Ross Becalick
11:31 am | April 10, 2004
I enjoyed it, and I'm genuinely interested in what's going to happen next... (big deal indeed!)

Don't stop, good stuff.
The Author
10:24 am | April 10, 2004
Okay I know it's short, just a foreword note that most of my stories WILL be pretty short. And this chapter was kind of rushed, so if it doesn't seem as good as the other two, thats why. Also, I posted the prologue of one of my new series called Beckoning to Doom, so try to read it when you're done.


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