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			| Nestor Nazario 12:56 pm | November 21, 2003
 Sorry, for making this story poorly written for some.  Believe me that the sequel will be a lot better than the first one, I rushed the first one since it was my first fan fiction.  Please post up comments that and suggestions on this story and come back for the second one,  Halo Recharged or Halo Reloaded, haven't decided yet.  The sequel shall come out soon.
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			| Nestor Nazario 5:46 am | November 21, 2003
 I have started the sequel and it is alot better than the first one.  It will be longer and better fight sequences, especially at the end one of the final battles is prettty cool.  Please read the sequel, "Halo: Reloaded" and if haven't yet, read Halo the Aftershocks.  The sequel come soon, expected by next week.
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			| anonymous 9:11 pm | November 20, 2003
 wow well all i have to say is that that was a truely poorly written story and it went WAY to fast, just correct some of the grammatical errors and it could be good
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			| stuff guy 12:38 pm | November 20, 2003
 come to xboxgamestorys.proboards23.com and post ur stories there!
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			| me 2:23 am | November 20, 2003
 it was da best
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			| Nightblade 11:46 pm | November 19, 2003
 awsome
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			| ONI_operative_343 11:19 pm | November 19, 2003
 uh huh...
 
 lets just wait till halo: first strike comes out, eh?
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			| Anonymous 10:57 pm | November 19, 2003
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