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Comments for 'Halo: The Return Part 6' |
Anonymous
4:39 pm | March 25, 2004
Dammit its CORTANA!!!!!!!
(u nimrod)
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Wado
11:36 am | August 21, 2002
Well I got through the stories. The centered text really makes it hard to read on my eyes. If you like the look, maybe justified text would be a compromise. As for the story, check the grammar and spelling a bit more, there's a good one in part 4 or 5 where ship is spelled with a t instead of a p. Keep it up, the story has some nice parts like the MC's interaction with others reminds me of a teacher I once had. It gets better as you go along too, so I'm expecting a really good one next time.
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NeoX
2:29 am | August 21, 2002
Wado, Sorry about the center text. I'll post part 7 all on the left side. Tell me how it is. As for the spelling and grammar, sorry. Me no good at english. Don't expect to much from me, I hope they are good, but you never know. Thanks
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el_halo_diablo
12:21 am | August 21, 2002
i read part one and the end of part 6 so i cant really expect anything good considering that i dont know what to expect ;)
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NeoX
9:50 pm | August 20, 2002
Well I have had these done and I just now decided to send them in. As for the center text thing, thats cool if you dont like it. Its just the better look to me.
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Wado
9:21 pm | August 20, 2002
Posted too many stories I think is the overload. Maybe just post one story and call it parts 1 through 6. I haven't read it yet, started on part 1, looked okay but the centered text isn't to my liking on anything longer than a short poem. I'll have to get back when I've read some more of it.
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NeoX
7:50 pm | August 20, 2002
That bad eh?
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el_halo_diablo
4:53 pm | August 20, 2002
arrgh.....reading...overload....cant....go on...reading*falls out of chair and dies*
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