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Comments for 'Shadow Ops II: Nowhere to Run, Chapter Seven' |
u know the chinese? they can fly!
7:08 pm | May 2, 2004
they can too
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Myth
12:36 pm | December 10, 2003
was that you who wanted to rewrite this great series or one of the frikin impersonnators
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kjldsfhlishflisa
12:13 pm | November 20, 2003
hey guys theres this new website xboxgamestorys.proboards23.com and you guys should go there and put your stories cuz its awesome thanks homes
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Blue Angel
9:17 am | November 19, 2003
I in the matter of fact have a least fifty stories in my head right now. Most of them are already written out, but as for the rest, will you'll just have to see about that.
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monitor101
10:36 pm | November 17, 2003
Awesome Nemesis keep it up, the cutting off of the ear was a little strange. 10/10/10. Keep it up!
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Walker
3:00 am | November 17, 2003
Mainevent, it's the curse of the good writer. Your hands can't move as fast as your mind. Happens all the time... I've "written" about two series in my head already.
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Havok
9:26 pm | November 16, 2003
van Gough style with the cutting off the ear. good stuff
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Mainevent
7:18 pm | November 16, 2003
Don't get me wrong, it was a good series, but the cursing brought it down a notch for me.
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Mainevent
7:18 pm | November 16, 2003
Gah, I hate when I do this. I have a great storyline in my head, but I have two stories I'm not done with. Actually three, and I can't start another until at least one is done.
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Blue Angel
1:34 pm | November 16, 2003
actually i mean fourty pages.
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Blue Angel
1:27 pm | November 16, 2003
you seem to have the same ideas as i but as for the most part you did quite well with this very well written story.
by the way plagerism is a word for the sellfish and the unaclaimed. you know the ones who dont know how to write a four page story in less than five hours. but just as tolkien said plagerism is just a word for the weak minded who pray on those lesser than themselves
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Nemesis
6:11 am | November 16, 2003
i thought i was the only one who saw that movie...it was good...well...soooo far, i've "borrowed" Tim Roth getting shot in the stomach, Mr. Blonde torturing the police officer, the whole bank robbery scence, but i've made a few changes with that
In the movie, Tim Roth gets shot in the stomach by a lady who grabs a gun from her compartment...in my story, Jamie Fisher gets shot in the stomach when climbing out of a huge van...the similarities are there, but overall, difference scene
Mr. Blonde, the quiet, somewhat psycho guy in the movie, does indeed cut the ear off a police officer and almost burns him alive. he also dances during this...the only change i've made is it's done to a marine and the name change
The bank robbery, the whole gang steals diamonds in the movie, while the Shadow Ops II squad steals money, and stock market accounts. different location.
the beginning of my story came from my mind exactly, i just used parts of that movie to make it seem a lot more better or something...in Reservoir Dogs, there are eight members of this gang, but only six of them actually go and steal these diamonds...i only have six guys in this squad, no one else...i feel that's all i've used that's pretty major so far...if anyone has a problem with this, sorry, but i get a lot of my knowledge based off movies or other video games (the first Shadow Ops series was based off Tears of the Sun).
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OmegaSapian
5:53 am | November 16, 2003
I've seen that movie by Quentin Tarantino. It's called Reservoir Dogs, you plagiarist.
Most of your writting was pretty good, but this pissed me off. Makes me wonder how much your other work has been a direct copy.
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Nemesis
4:23 am | November 16, 2003
my bad Mainevent...one more chapter in this series, then it's done, i don't think i did a very good job...i'll probably take a long break after this, then come back as Agent Shade, hopefully continue The Last War maybe, or start something new...
thanks guys
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Mainevent
2:23 am | November 16, 2003
I know you're tryin to achieve a modd here Nemesis, but seriously, can we cut back on the language a wee bit? After about 5 f-words in a row, you kinda get turned off.
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Sergeant B
11:08 pm | November 15, 2003
Good man. I liked it. A little...geeky, but good. And Jamie Fisher, the traitor, killing tech specialist Todd Maddox, sad...
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SOS.Odin
10:30 pm | November 15, 2003
first series was great.
this ones almost puttin it to shame
gj
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NIghtblade
8:12 pm | November 15, 2003
AWESOMEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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snowy_duck
6:51 pm | November 15, 2003
hmmmmmmmm 2 words......"desturbing" and "good" that hole cutting off the ear thing was freaky
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Blue Angel
6:27 pm | November 15, 2003
i have never read your first stories but man was that cool! i know that shove is spelled different but then again im just the same i cant spell that well. but i am a little linguistic. very good story maybe all read the others when i have the time.
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Ishkabibbl
3:51 pm | November 15, 2003
Dum-dum-dum-dummmmm!
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