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Comments for 'Alcatraz Choronicles--chapter 1' |
monitor101
10:54 pm | January 14, 2004
Thanks Knightmare. For those of you who are thinking it I wasn't the one who posted under 'Your Story Sucked Ass' That wasn't me.
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Night Shadow
3:53 pm | January 11, 2004
Pretty good story. Could be better, but i'll keep on reading.
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Knightmare(MM
3:18 pm | January 11, 2004
Namely the 'Your story sucks ass' person.
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Knightmare(MM
3:17 pm | January 11, 2004
Ph, and that poster under me... quiet down, dickhead. The comments section doesn't want to hear you.
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Knightmare(MM
3:13 pm | January 11, 2004
Hey guys and gals.., leave Monitor alone. He didn't like the story, neither do I. For various reasons. What are you going to do, harp on me? There's not much else you CAN do, and if you do, I'll likely just disregard it as the writings of people who have nothing else positive to do with their lives.
Nazgul, if you'd like me to tell you WHY I didn't like the story, drop me a line.
GuardedWinter@aol.com
Take it easy
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Trogdor The Burninator
7:14 am | January 11, 2004
It's an okay story, but it needs some work in some places. The fight on the ship's bridge should be elaborated, and the prison scene should have some more detail as to what's going on and where it's at.
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Your Story Sucks Ass
2:28 am | January 11, 2004
Sorry but this story needs to be burned then reburned after that get it destroyed by a nuke!
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Your Story Sucks Ass
2:28 am | January 11, 2004
Sorry but this story needs to be burned then reburned after that get it destroyed by a nuke!
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monitor101
11:23 pm | January 10, 2004
Sorry for all the comments just gotta set a few things straight. Hey Nazgul, people who come writinr pointless storys...why post. Oh yah its just a story right MasterGrunt? And Nazgul need's that little french mark thing at the top.
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Ishkabibbl
11:21 pm | January 10, 2004
Normaly I try to say why it sucks, so they have a chance of fixing it next time around. God knows I can't write a decent story, but normaly people say "For god's sake, just stop writing you didn't even (usefull tip here)!" and such.
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monitor101
11:21 pm | January 10, 2004
Thats what I forgot to add, in past experiances I've learned that shooting your mouth off isn't a good thing, oh and monitor is spelled with an O not an E, thats another thing I learned.
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monitor101
11:15 pm | January 10, 2004
Actually it was. So eveyone gets pissed because I dislike the story...funny...well we are all entitled to our opinions. Hey MasterGrunt don't even start...its called defense. So everyone freaks over a little comment...who said anything about not posting bad comments that don't praise storys? I like some and I don't like some. I won't go raging off again.
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Da Mann
11:26 pm | January 9, 2004
Nice story. It seemed a little too fast-paced and sketchy in a few places, but in general, the plot and concept are okay.
P.S. Is your Lieutenant Peters supposed to be reminiscient of the badass lucky son-of-a-bitch Lieutenant Peters from GLADIATRRR3000's 'A Marine Named Peters' series?
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Hawk7886
11:24 pm | January 9, 2004
I don't think that was the real monitor101. . .
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MasterGrunt
2:41 pm | January 9, 2004
Hey monitor just lay off nazgul okay. It's just a screen name after all. I've noticed that you get really pissed off every time someone disses even one sentence in your story.
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monitor101
12:06 pm | January 9, 2004
Indented, spaced out and short, stupid, and pointless. Hell even the title was spelled wrong. Choronicles...what were you thinking or...
Very confusing. I recommend that LOTR fans who are obbsessed enough to make a name from the books should not write Halo storys. 40/100, I suggest that you never write here again...ever...ever. And God have mercy on soul!
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Nazgul
1:25 am | January 9, 2004
screw it, i'll try something else
hey moniter: people who just come to make fun...why comment? at least give me some advice, but who cares right? screw you!
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Person
11:05 pm | January 8, 2004
I thought that your story was good. The only thing that I thought you should have done was give the elites in the begining names. But thats just me. (and im not a very good writer) :]
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Soul Harveter 117
7:12 pm | January 8, 2004
The stroy was confusing. I understand the part about the rescue, but after that it got all confuggling. I would rate it 6.5
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MasterGrunt
3:09 pm | January 8, 2004
Pretty good story except for the part about the weapons being destroyed. I doubt their weapons wouldbe wrecked and not them. By the way are you a fan of LOTR?
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