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Comments for 'A Spartan's Path - chapter 5'



Jumphappy
11:10 pm | February 16, 2004
Keep writing. You've come up with a great story!
Myth
12:15 pm | December 14, 2003
and in 343GS have you ever had one round in your assault rifle and fired and seen the chain reaction of the popping? That's what I meant, and also because Ace has a S4 AM, a much more powerful rifle that fires exploive rounds, just to clear that up next few chapters are gonna be good, keep reading guys...cheers =D
Myth
3:58 am | December 13, 2003
whoa that was fast
witelancer
3:51 am | December 13, 2003
very nice, the Flood attack was well-done, reminded me of actually playing the game. Just a question: if the S2AM fires a 14.5 mm round, could it really pop "hundreds of infection forms at once"? sorry to get hung up on technicalities, but yeah...
-9/10, a few spelling/grammar errors.
Myth
3:51 am | December 13, 2003
c'mon guys I need some feed back here, If you don't correct me if you don't like it I can't fix anything, just saying.


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