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Comments for 'From Darkness'



Burny
7:24 pm | April 12, 2004
What I meant by odd was the setting. Imo, it seemed...diffeent to me.
Nick Kang
10:44 am | April 11, 2004
Great story, very suspenseful. Well-explained battle sequences.

9.7/10

NK
Helljumper
10:30 pm | April 10, 2004
I agree with Wiley

ODST
MT
8:27 pm | April 10, 2004
To Burny: Odd? Hmm, interesting. What was odd? The Lieutenant? My decription of the Forerunner passageway? Well, I never expected a comment like that. Thankyou.

To Mainevent: It would require too much commitment on my part. A short story a week will do me exercising the creative part of my brain.
Actually, I've just finished my next one. I had a idea centralized on just one theme and spent three hours writing three quarters of it up straight away. Just finished it off a while ago. Going to take my time polishing it and put it up by next week.
Maybe I will start a series later. After all, I can't keep thinking up different battles/events that might have happened on Halo.
Burny
8:11 pm | April 10, 2004
Very well written. A bit odd, but the again, oddness makes a story stand out. Very suspenseful.

9.8/10
Mainevent
4:33 pm | April 10, 2004
I just sorta jumped into the big story and went from there. It's odd really. I wrote Homeworlds and let it sit for a while. Somehow I found HBO and figured, "Hey, I'll submit it. Why not?" It got good reviews and I built it up from there. You can try it. And you don't even have to know where it'll go.

Cuz to tell everyone here the truth, I make up Homeworlds as I go. Yea, kinda odd. Off the old noggin as I write.
MT
2:13 pm | April 10, 2004
Thankyou for reading.

No, it's not part of a series. I'm just going to start off with short stories. Way too much work needed on a novel. I might do a mini-series story one of these days, but it won't be in the near future. Just got to develop my writing style a lot more before I tackle anything big.
Wiley
12:57 pm | April 10, 2004
this a series? I'd like for it to be.


Very, very good. I like your pacing. Combat was very well writtin.


all in all a 9.7/10


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