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Comments for 'Scorpion Strike' |
System Failure
10:53 pm | April 4, 2004
Really good story. Nice action decriptions. As for the grammar, I can barley talk straight so i cant complain. And I agree with FOrunnER woth the lack of human casulaties. If the Covenant were so damn easy to kill we'd bewipin our asses with them.
P.S. Check out my story Halo 2: The New Front. Read the series not chap 5.
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Helljumper
1:06 am | April 4, 2004
Yea it was good, but u need to proof read it, for the grammer mistakes and some f the sentences were confusing. I personally think some of the Marines should have died just to make it more believeable.
ODST
First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
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FOrunnER
4:48 pm | April 3, 2004
It was a good story, but I would have liked it alot better if there had been human casualties. If the Covenant are pushovers, then why are they kicking out buts?
Oh well, nice story anyway.
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Nick Kang
3:54 pm | April 3, 2004
Yeah, there are a lot of grammatical errors, but it's almost impossible o eliminate all those. Very gof job, this would make a nice series. Good detail in the places it really needed it.
9.5/10
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Wiley
8:33 pm | April 2, 2004
Very good, Nice action sequences.
A few grammar errors, but you get those no matter how much you check it...
9.6/10
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