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Comments for 'Empty :: Chapter 1'



MoZ
7:12 pm | July 1, 2004
Any comments would be appreciated. Unless of course their mean, then i'll just cry in my corn flakes.
MoZ
7:12 pm | July 1, 2004
Helljumper, I'll definitely be getting more into his "training" in later chapters. Let's just say for now that it's not typical or average by any means.
Helljumper
7:12 pm | July 1, 2004
Great use of emotions. I liked it. How does one go from a Pelican pilot to a Spec Ops sniper in 6 months. I liked this sentence, "Some amount of blood spilled would make him a man again wouldn't it?"

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