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Comments for 'The Virus Part 5'



monitor101
6:54 pm | July 18, 2003
soon
pooman
12:36 am | July 17, 2003
i need the next chapter!!!!! when is it kumin out?
monitor101
10:15 pm | July 14, 2003
Yah its good to be back!
harley
5:51 am | July 13, 2003
yes he was a great author, and Oh yeah more thing welcome back monitor.
Frensa Geran
5:40 am | July 13, 2003
Yeah, I have him to thank for me not sucking as much anymore. He gave excellent commentary and his stories were wonderful.
monitor101
10:50 pm | July 12, 2003
Well see ya later apache119 even though we live right next to each other lol. I dont know what happened to Wado he was practicly the best author here I guess he just left thanks again for the comments!
harley
8:33 pm | July 12, 2003
oh yeah one question whatever happened too Wado did he just quit or what I liked his stories alot too.
HunterKiller
7:08 pm | July 12, 2003
Awesome! I've been waiting for this for a long time. Great that youre back. Awesome! 10/10
apache119
6:09 pm | July 12, 2003
I think I am done writing the story that I posted on this website. It was called the Unknown Apprentice. If you liked that story there will be no more to be written. I am done with the writing of the fan fiction at halo.bungie.org. It was fun while it lasted.
harley
7:28 am | July 12, 2003
I really enjoy this series alot. 10/10.
Just grammer is a little problem but who cares lol. can't wait till the other chapters come out.
Well peace out.
Elfster
4:10 am | July 12, 2003
Umm... Duh... it's pointless to read chapter five without reading the other chapters. But its still sort of pointless. Even if it was transferred through the air, they were going to take every caution anyways.
monitor101
8:17 pm | July 11, 2003
No prob apache!
apache119
8:00 pm | July 11, 2003
sorry, I think I posted the same comment twice
monitor101
7:53 pm | July 11, 2003
Thanks for the comments keep them coming! He stepped on his throat to keep him from screaming and making noise even though they had sound proof walls. For those of you who haven't read this entire series I suggest going back and reading the other chapters like I said in the authors note. My thanks to apache119 for making this possible!
apache119
7:51 pm | July 11, 2003
great story 11/10
apache119
7:51 pm | July 11, 2003
great story 10/10. Cool how taylor died
'Nosolee
6:09 pm | July 11, 2003
I guess it was to not make the virus spread?
CaRnAgE
2:24 pm | July 11, 2003
ya welcome back ur story is great 10/10 (why did they step on his thorat?)
'Nosolee
12:36 pm | July 11, 2003
Cool...WELCOME BACK! Your story is good, it has some mistakes and dont forget to [indent]. 9/10
scope
5:58 am | July 11, 2003
8.5/10 Elfster have u read the previous chapters? They would help u to understand why he died such a way/
Elfster
5:04 am | July 11, 2003
good, exciting, has it's action, not perfect, but not much is. Taylor dying was a tad weird. Why did they step on his throat of all places? (Would have been extremely painful I think) Anyways 7.5/10


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