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Comments for 'The Enemy Within-Chapter Four: Ask, Seek, Knock'

3:39 pm | May 15, 2004
Your on a roll man! Not just any roll though! Rollin like a ring-shaped facility of colossal proportions!!! Keep up that descriptive state of mind(it'll get ya places). Lookin forward to the next chapter!

Dammit Jenkins Fire Your Weapon!!!
7:24 pm | April 10, 2004
More good marks, and more gladness.

To Ross: You are vary much welcome. I strive to make a story that a reader can ready fet into. Not have to swim against a current to really get stuff out of it.

5:57 pm | March 8, 2004
Thx guys, I hate to sound boastful, but those comments really make me want to write even more.

Jon M
4:59 am | March 1, 2004
Super Nice! So far, I've tried to find plenty to say about everyone else's stories, but I'm just going to stick by...Super Nice!

It's kind of warm and fuzzy like a Mind_Affecting_Parasite
1:48 am | March 1, 2004
Awesome story, I hope you include dwegol and his fellow grunts a little more.
Ross Becalick
7:34 pm | February 29, 2004
Damn keyboard...
Ross Becalick
7:30 pm | February 29, 2004
My god, that's the best fic I've read since Chris Cox- before he committed suicide and I was called 'Traumatised Marine.'

11/10... It was just so absorbing, I really was drawn into the story rather than having to make an effort like a lot of the drawl that one can find.

I suppose you've just got a writing style I'm perfectly suited to, but I really realy enjoyed that. Thaks very much!
4:59 pm | February 27, 2004
I read all kindsa people's stories, and sometimes I'll comment, but I'm yet to work up the get-up-and-go to write my own...
CoLd BlooDed
3:54 pm | February 27, 2004
I'd say its due to what I call "newbism", some people only read stories if they know the author well, it used to happen to me.

But in order to get comments, you need to read other peoples. But wait, you've already done that haven't you? Hmmm...newbism strikes again.
2:46 pm | February 27, 2004
By the way, hate to fill this page with so much of me but, feel free to email me with comments: pbplayer_24@yahoo.com!!!!!

2:26 pm | February 27, 2004
It looks like we have a nice little chat room in here now. WHERE ARE THE MULTIPLE COMMENTS FROM MULTIPLE PEOPLE? Please just come on. Hello? Anybody out there?

CoLd BlooDed
12:27 pm | February 27, 2004
No, I was partially kidding, but it did seem different, maybe it was the fact that it was doubled in length? ;)
7:29 pm | February 26, 2004
What? Was that not a good thing?

CoLd BlooDed
3:58 pm | February 26, 2004
Maybe it was the Warrant Officer listening to music...
MC's Cousin
12:20 pm | February 26, 2004
About as good as the others you have written. Not bad. I like how you finally doubled your length, gave us more to read. But somehow this one sounded a little different than the others. A little off maybe? I'm not sure...

Signing Off

CoLd BlooDed
12:09 pm | February 26, 2004
Better, longer, good action and descriptions. Good job Mind, I'm waiting for the next.
5:28 pm | February 25, 2004
Just in case anyone wonders or doesn't, that verse in there is in fact: Matthew 7:7, seeing how Bungie has an obsession with the number 7.