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Comments for 'Marl's War Part1' |
spectre
3:11 pm | May 3, 2004
Maybe tomorrow.
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Marl
9:02 pm | May 2, 2004
Any real advice?
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spectre
4:41 am | May 2, 2004
I'm not a geek either. I don't like cigs though, I prefer Black and Milds, I love Bisexual girls, All thier female friends, my .380, basketball,music,I hate school, mostly just glad that I haven't had to go for two years. So they can't kick me out no more. And the Marine, I love the Marines.
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Marl
2:31 am | May 2, 2004
A little too specific, but okay, whatever
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Helljumper
2:02 am | May 2, 2004
because u made such a big deal bout me not reading your story, i finnally did, it sucks, it blows horse penis. The concept was interesting but no. The details didn't develop the characters. There were grammar issues. The story was all around bad. sorry to break the news to you. Please don't try again.
ODST
bitch
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Marl
1:59 am | May 2, 2004
Other than indenting, what else does it need. Please be specific
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Helljumper
12:09 am | May 2, 2004
I'm wiht Mainevent but not lean
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Mainevent
10:08 pm | May 1, 2004
Actually, I'm not a geek.
I'm not buff or anything, but I'm definitely not weak, and I'm very lean. (Lean, not skinny, there is a difference) I love girls, guns, and games. I hate homos, fanatical muslims, and intollerant people.
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Solidus Snake
9:43 pm | May 1, 2004
I'm not a geek, I'm a dude. With some acne, its not bad. Oh well its all part of growing up. I'm buff, I got a six pack, I'm smart, umm... my heart hurts, its breaking. I love music, I love KoRn, I love bisexual girls, I love Halo, I love cigs, I love beer, I love guns, I love violance, I love sex, I love Marissa, I love Victoria, I love Victoria's twin sister, I love many things. What about y'all, ahhahhahahahha.
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Marl
6:30 pm | May 1, 2004
I guess that would make me the game geek with no life who's heart hurts every time I stop playing Red Faction II or Halo
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Nick Kang
12:43 pm | May 1, 2004
And I'm probably the geek that brings the teacher an apple everyday with severe acne and glasses so thick they would burn my eyebrows off if I looked at the sun. I would also be wearing a shirt that said:
'Everything I know I learned from Einstein's Quantum Theory.'
lol
NK
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Solidus Snake
2:58 am | May 1, 2004
This story is hard to follow.
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Mainevent
12:50 am | May 1, 2004
That's right, ONE EYE!
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Mainevent
12:50 am | May 1, 2004
Which means I'm the one-eyed band geek in the corner with one eye and a pimple on my lip.
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Helljumper
12:43 am | May 1, 2004
technically i called u a biotch... now i'm calling u a bitch... bitch
its all good, just messing with ya, stop talking it so personally, i mean damn this is Halo fanfic, this isn't school, where u gotta defend ya reputation, on this site it is all based on your writing skills.
ODST
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Nick Kang
11:51 am | April 30, 2004
I don't find stories that don't use the code that much harder to read. My first fanfic didn't use the code, and people weren't bitchin at me about it.
NK
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Marl
11:31 am | April 30, 2004
Thank you
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Mainevent
11:27 am | April 30, 2004
It's okay Marl, we all have our mistakes. You're new, and now you know how the code system works. I've asked Helljumper to politely back down some, and he has graciously agreed. Please show some kindness and let any ill will die, and I'm sure we can all get along here.
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Marl
11:06 am | April 30, 2004
Now, I don't mean to be a bitch, and I'm sorry, but could you at least show me a little support instead of crying to your mom that I didn't indent? For god sake, it's my first Fan Fic, of corse it's going tobe rough and have some mistakes. I read the code, I just didn't understand some stuff
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Marl
1:53 am | April 30, 2004
What I just wanted to know is why the code was such a big deal, then you call me a bitch.
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Helljumper
1:51 am | April 30, 2004
*calm voice* i'm not bitching about mr. Marl not using the code, if u read my first post, i simply stated that I will not read it because he did not use the code. He started all of this.
ODST
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Marl
9:59 pm | April 29, 2004
I don't care that you didn't read it, I'm mad because of the reason
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Mainevent
9:48 pm | April 29, 2004
Marl: If you do messup then you will have a paragraph that starts off [indent[ blah blah blah.
That's what the preview section is for.
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Helljumper
9:20 pm | April 29, 2004
i always ident, i messed up one time in like 8 posts so please get off my dick bout this cause i didn't read your shitty, newbie story.
ODST
First to rise last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
and we don't take shit
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Marl
7:26 pm | April 29, 2004
Also, on your first Fan Fic, you didn't indent, Helljumper.
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Marl
7:21 pm | April 29, 2004
I know that, but what I didn't know is if a computer coded it, and I was afraid if I made one mistake I'd have paragraph that started like:
(Indent) blah blah blah
And I didn't want to take that chance
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Mainevent
7:10 pm | April 29, 2004
Don't blame Helljumper. There's a button with intsructions on how to use the code specifically for that purpose. If he chooses not to read it because you failed to properly utilize that tidbit of information, it is by all means his choice.
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Helljumper
11:51 am | April 29, 2004
i refuse to read it because u didn't use the code
ODST
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Helljumper
3:25 am | April 29, 2004
thats what i said biotch
ODST
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Marl
1:19 am | April 29, 2004
You refuse to read it because I didn't know how to indent?
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Nick Kang
8:17 pm | April 28, 2004
You need to put [indent] before the stuff you want to indent.
NK
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Marl
8:06 pm | April 28, 2004
What I didn't get when I made this is how to indent.
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Ishkabibbl
7:48 pm | April 28, 2004
...Litter and Fang...lol
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Nick Kang
7:39 pm | April 28, 2004
I like the Red vs. Blue-esque style, although in some places the grammar made it somewhat difficult to read.
NK
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