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Comments for 'Halo 2: Chapter 5 ; Part 2 of 2' |
Anonymous
1:46 pm | April 4, 2004
NOt bad soldier not bad at all. A few spelling mistakes. I kept on getting lost trying to keep track who was who who was where. Try making it easier to keep track. I know there are at least 3 groups. I'd say your story is decent, no above average.
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