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Comments for 'Halo ABC's'



Berconius
12:52 am | October 4, 2003
Nice job although I also never saw how John fell in love with Kelly-87.

9/10
Alpha Lance
9:38 pm | September 30, 2003
That was interesting, I love this poem.
ONI_operative_343
11:33 am | September 30, 2003
alot of these were pretty clever and amusing; cept some were kinda choppy... it was fun to read though. i sent it to all my LAN party buddies. great job!
Hunter_Killer
11:11 am | September 30, 2003
Still, good. 9/10
Hunter_Killer
11:11 am | September 30, 2003
DONT TRASH NEEDLERS!!! HUNTER_KILLER LOVES THE NEEDLE SPEWING DEATH MACHINES!!!!!!
Sergeant B
12:41 am | September 30, 2003
Yeah Mainevant. Excellent! I love it. Very original. And yup, I saw the love between John and Kelly. They probably like each other........
Walker
12:41 am | September 30, 2003
Halo ABCs... reminds me slightly of Teen Girl Squad (http://www.homestarrunner.com/tgsmenu.html) in some odd way. Probably because I just watched it, and they are both funny. See the connection? Anyway, great stuff, keep it up.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Walker
12:41 am | September 30, 2003
Loved it.
Jamirus99
6:07 pm | September 29, 2003
I liked this...alot. Fresh, orginal, is my new theme, and this just fir right in. Very good- the choppiness could be forgiven cause you had some other moments of great word order.
The Scribe
3:48 pm | September 29, 2003
Good poem. Some were a little choppy, but my stories arent perfecy either. 9/10
riot
1:51 pm | September 29, 2003
oh wow. halo abc's. you're so clever. gr8 jb d00d.
Mainevent
10:28 am | September 29, 2003
I always saw a little sometin between him and kelley, but I probably should've used keyes. Eh, too late now.
crashedwarthog
10:15 am | September 29, 2003
that was good man, sometimes didn't flow quite well but thats wat most poems are like. Gr8. 10/10
Elfster
2:49 am | September 29, 2003
Lol that was great, you deserve alot of credit, it must have taken alot of time for you to come up with that.
Ishkabibbl
2:24 am | September 29, 2003
I never knew that the MC 'loved' Kelley.


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