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Comments for 'Homeworlds XIV'

10:29 pm | November 9, 2003
this one sounds a bit more rushed then the others, i think i can talk for most people here that GOOD writings sporadicaly(sp) is better then writings that come every other day. cause this is some good writing. just not as good as the others
7:05 pm | September 25, 2003
It's short because during typing a sudden event arose which made me find a quick solution to how I can leave this one off.
3:14 am | September 25, 2003
Its pretty good, but I think it should be longer
Sergeant B
1:28 am | September 25, 2003
Alpha Lance
8:45 pm | September 24, 2003
Hey, I like it alot, and for some reason, that date and time going between them two bars give it a warm book feelin. I don't know why? But keep it M-E. I want to see alot more from you.
10:28 am | September 24, 2003
This is a lull right now, until they get out of the Septagon and into real fights. But there will be something pretty soon (XV hopefully) to keep you interested.
10:19 am | September 24, 2003
hmm thats ok. try to make it a little more... original... and then you should be ok. 8/10