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Comments for 'A Savage Vengeance [Part 2]'

5:13 am | July 18, 2004
I never knew that someone could write my own death so cool. Lol...Thanks for killing me off Main you SOB. Good story. 9/10...would have had 10 if I didnt die! lol.

Keep it up.

Oh, and BTW, Why am I getting NO CREDIT!? I helped out with the Savage....I named it at least. Isnt there a saying, "Give credit where credit is due"?

11:13 am | July 16, 2004
*Jaw hits ground*

2:24 am | July 16, 2004
Narrowly ducks Wiley's jaw. You bastard!
CoLd BlooDed
2:18 am | July 16, 2004
*Picks Wileys jaw up off ground and hits Mainevent with it, knocking all competition out of the fan fiction section*

Take that, ya bastard. :P
11:08 am | July 15, 2004
wow that was superb. the Savage must've been one hell of a creature to first be shot by a Marine, after it had killed 2 Spartans.
4:53 am | July 15, 2004
Just Posted Part one of my FFC entry. It'll probably be 3 or 4 sections long. So expect some good reading for at least that many Fan Fic updates. ;)
1:01 am | July 15, 2004
That Savage was very badass. Expect to see more of them in the future.

And thank you all for the gracious comments!
CoLd BlooDed
12:03 am | July 15, 2004
Electric Racket + Flying Insects that Sting = Good Fun.
8:09 pm | July 14, 2004
Terrific writing. I really liked the part about the soldier looking into the eyes of his enemies. That could have easily been really corny and cliche, but you pulled it off without either of those problems. Great work.
MC's Cousin
4:26 pm | July 14, 2004
I have a word for work like this: Excellent.
Even I must say, thank you. It has been a while since I read something like this. It gives me hope that some good writers still dwell here.
Ahh, I'm glad I chose this post to come back.

Signing Off

3:34 pm | July 14, 2004
Very cool! Good work!
3:34 pm | July 14, 2004
Very cool! Good work!
Nick Kang
2:17 pm | July 14, 2004
I feel...inspired.

10:37 pm | July 13, 2004
CoLd BlooDed
10:21 pm | July 13, 2004
Wow, Main, just... wow. How long ago has it been since the first chapter came out? Time seems distorted because of n00bs.

Anyways, I loved it, this is what you became known for. You're truly still one of the masters at writing on this site because of this kind of work. The fighting, the Savage's point of view, and the ending - it all seemed so intertwined and perfect that I didn't stop reading until the end.

Very good job.
9:23 pm | July 13, 2004
The beginning... read and read soo many times my eyes will start to bleed soon. Too. Fucking. Good. To. Be. True!

What was the rest of the story about? :p Nah, I absolutely loved this one. Great work, man!
8:22 pm | July 13, 2004
Written really well, you described the fighting really nice.
7:39 pm | July 13, 2004
That was well written like a novel. Once I started I couldn't stop. Noobs need to read great stories like this.

7:39 pm | July 13, 2004
Very cool story. I hate it when somebody (the human) who struggles so hard to live ends up dying--so sad. At least the Spartans had the last say.
Team Halo
7:15 pm | July 13, 2004
ur the best