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Comments for 'A Savage Vengeance [Part 1]'



romac1991
2:31 am | July 8, 2004
It's called Instacrete, no quickCrete
CovieKilla
5:35 am | July 4, 2004
Oh dear God No! Only I know what happens, and that means YOU losers gotta wait! MUAHAHA! lol....

Oh well... I hope that I continue to be a kick ass character.
Mainevent
6:36 pm | July 1, 2004
Credit, I'll show you credit!

Just wait til the next chapter!
CovieKilla
6:32 pm | July 1, 2004
Main, WHERE THE FUCK IS MY CREDIT!?

I helped this SOB...Im the Main Character too. :)

Good Work, anyway bro.
Mainevent
2:42 pm | July 1, 2004
I forgot what color the Jackal's blood was. So I asked someone I knew *looks around*, and they said they thought it was orange. Which I thought originally. But I dunno, its a rainbow of colors.
Awacar
1:10 pm | July 1, 2004
Right, Wiley, my mistake.
Dari
5:22 am | July 1, 2004
It was great. And its good to see all the veteran and older writers start coming back. Btw, "orange blood" for the Jackal?
Wiley
9:50 pm | June 30, 2004
The closet, Awacar. Not the box, the closet.
Mainevent
6:23 pm | June 30, 2004
I really hope he wasn't serious...
Awacar
4:37 pm | June 30, 2004
I like! I like!

To Bonecrusher: If you're serious, get out, we don't want another "GPD" incident. Well, at least romac did came out of the box at the end...
Bonecrusher
5:35 am | June 30, 2004
Yeah, I was talking to yo gay ass, Mainevent. Ya hurd?
Bonecrusher
5:33 am | June 30, 2004
Stop acting black, white boy.
Mainevent
1:41 am | June 30, 2004
Diswhat?-who you talking bout Willis?
SeverianofUrth
9:09 pm | June 29, 2004
Hey- I remember Dispraiser. He was the only one who read the first story I did, and commented on them. Read four more of the chapters, too. I remember because he was the only one who offered advice besides "You Suck!" or "Go Back to Where You Came From, n00b!" Around last September, I believe...
Mainevent
5:26 pm | June 29, 2004
Whenever the submit page goes down, just try a couple times and it usually goes through.

And Wiley, you're right. I didn't mention you because you never left.
Nick Kang
1:10 pm | June 29, 2004
Yeah, the FF submission form is all messed up lately.

This story was awesome! I got a little confused in the vehicle garage, but the story made up for it later!

NK
Wiley
12:52 pm | June 29, 2004
Hey, Main...you forgot me! Well...maybe because I never left so it'd be hard to return.

Oh, and great story. 9.7/10
CoLd BlooDed
11:31 am | June 29, 2004
lol, hey Walker, welcome back.
Mainevent
11:15 am | June 29, 2004
They am tough bizatches, I'll give them that.

And is this the return of the Veterans? Is our day of darkness and gloom to be removed? Hopefully Dispraiser, Steele, and the rest will return. We already got Walker and Wado back.

Where is my COTGB? Huh Walker? Where is it?!?!?!
BansheeBoy
6:23 am | June 29, 2004
Great! Looking forward to part 2!
Walker
1:30 am | June 29, 2004
Well, I'm done, formatted it with the code and all that, but when I click the "preview submission" buttion, it tells me "the page cannot be displayed." So I guess I'll just have to try again tomorrow.

Wish me luck!

-Walker
Walker
12:09 am | June 29, 2004
And thank you, Cold.
Walker
12:07 am | June 29, 2004
Uh, almost done... a few more lines... the ending of this chapter is so hard to pull off...
Walker
9:38 pm | June 28, 2004
Very good... If I came up against one of those things I'd want a rocket launcher handy...

Can't wait to see where this one goes.

-Walker
Severian
8:42 pm | June 28, 2004
What boredom? I thought this was great.
Mainevent
7:59 pm | June 28, 2004
And as for the boredome, this is setting up for their big duel in the next part.
Helljumper
7:57 pm | June 28, 2004
It was good, but i gotta admit that at points i was confused and got bored. sorry.

ODST
Mainevent
7:57 pm | June 28, 2004
Its only two parts, I should have written Part 1 of 2, but I didn't feel like it. The Savage will be in other stories though.
Ajax
7:39 pm | June 28, 2004
Sweetness, cool new dude.
CoLd BlooDed
7:12 pm | June 28, 2004
I loved it, great work, Main. A good start to a new series.


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