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Comments for 'On Their Shields: The Exodus, pt. 2'



MadJackal
3:33 am | February 14, 2004
What the hell?! There is someone with my name here? that is weird man. I had no idea there was a mad jackal on this site before I picked my name, jeez. I got the name from Resident Evil 3. Anyways, I don't know if you're still around, mad_jackal, but you do have talent.
MASTER XBOX
4:48 pm | August 6, 2003
WHERE IS WADO ???? OH YEAH HES DEAD HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA !!!!!!!!!!!
Danny Hill
2:49 am | October 22, 2002
awesome story i want more...e-mail me when you make the next one.i want to be one of the first to read itnEo_Matrix2088@hotmail.comalso do you play halo on xbconnect?if you do whats your name? mines heltic-fighter.if you don't you should.www.xbconnect.comyou can hook up your xbox to the internet and play halo
Kyle
8:56 pm | October 18, 2002
Dude, it really is a good story. Make your next chapter!
Kyle
2:02 am | October 12, 2002
Dude, keep writing! Don't let our criticizm get you down! You're actually pretty cool! I enjoy your fan fics a lot!
Commander 035
5:42 pm | October 6, 2002
I tend to agree with ???, this story was good. Keep it up, Jackal!
???
5:33 pm | October 6, 2002
I liked this story. I like the way it describes the other part of the Spartan conflict on reach. Nicely done, Jackal!
Hmm
5:20 pm | October 6, 2002
I notice on some of the stories their are people who have never posted on any stories before then post on one persons story, with really stupid names. All I'm gonna say is hmm...
Hmmm
5:20 pm | October 6, 2002
I notice on some of the stories their are people who have never posted on any stories before then post on one persons story, with really stupid names. All I'm gonna say is hmm...
HMmm
5:20 pm | October 6, 2002
I notice on some of the stories their are people who have never posted on any stories before then post on one persons story, with really stupid names. All I'm gonna say is hmm...
bob
4:26 pm | October 6, 2002
storys good so far keep writing
Kyle
2:45 am | October 6, 2002
Yo! mad Jackal, have you cheched out my after Halo series? Search for my name in the search engine! And leave a comment after you read it.
Anonymous
2:44 am | October 6, 2002
Sorry. I was just angry. Your story is excellent.
Kyle
2:02 am | October 5, 2002
Really? How old is nike?
helljumper
8:15 pm | October 4, 2002
hey man, you dont owe me any apology. i like your ideas. you got some great stuff. keep it goin!
mad_jackal
9:32 am | October 4, 2002
I'm honored that so many " lifer " fan-fic authors here at this site are following this series. I appreciate the comments you all have posted here. Anonymous, I'm not sure what I have done to offend you and I hope that you will voice your opposition to me in the next post. Helljumper, I do owe you an apology. When I was first working up the courage to post a story on this site, I wanted to read a couple of stories first just to see what has already been covered by other authors. I used to play an RPG called " Traveller " and they had defensive armaments called " sandcasters ", which functioned exactly like your TADDs. So, people, I am belatedly crediting Helljumper ( who writes a fine series himself )as a 'technical consultant ' for my story. El_halo_diablo, my hat's off to you too. Everyone should check out his series, too. I hope to have the third installment out this weekend. Stay tuned...
el_halo_diablo
10:59 pm | October 3, 2002
yah i think you tie with Nike for "the youngest fan fic person here" award Kyle
Kyle
9:38 pm | October 3, 2002
Yeah. I'm a newbie myself.
Spartan415 (MM
9:07 pm | October 3, 2002
I like how this is moving along. Nice to see good newbies.
helljumper
1:44 pm | October 3, 2002
hey man, i think the new guy has got a hell of a story going here. besides, we should only offer constructive criticism, right?
el_halo_diablo
10:05 pm | October 2, 2002
hey give the newb a break.
Anonymous
8:24 pm | October 2, 2002
i DON'T REALLY LIKE THIS mAD jACKAL GUY.
helljumper
2:24 am | October 2, 2002
the third chapter in the helljumper series, i mean.
helljumper
2:22 am | October 2, 2002
maybe its just a coincidence. i dunno. remember my TADD idea in like the third chapter? i think Wado made some comment about it.
el_halo_diablo
1:23 am | October 2, 2002
Not a bad story, keep it up!
el_halo_diablo
1:23 am | October 2, 2002
dude I don't even think he borrowed that idea...
helljumper
12:00 am | October 2, 2002
very impressive writing. i like it a lot. i see you "borrowed" my Titanium A dust idea. with a writer as talented as you, i dont mind, but just let me know next time. i want to know who is using my ingenious ideas to spice up thier stories, hehe. anyway, great work, cant wait for the next chapter!
GMAN
8:40 pm | October 1, 2002
great read, keep it up!
gruntkiller
7:35 pm | October 1, 2002
good very good


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