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Comments for 'The Iron Hands of the Prophets (Finale): Two Betrayals'



MadJackal
4:06 pm | April 10, 2004
Sorry, New001, I've got Halo on my XBox. I'm probably going to finish A Killing Glare after I finish Specters, but who knows. I'll determine which I want to start on in a few days.
New001
7:28 am | April 10, 2004
good job kodos to you now will you please finish Cadet 787 please I really want to see what hapens. Also do you have the PC, if so my name is New001. Live long and prosper,
Jimmy... I mean New001
P.S. I like el fudge cookies there the best.
Nick Kang
10:06 pm | April 9, 2004
This has got to be one of the best series on HBO. Great plot, good dialogue, explosive detail, well explained battle sequences, I think this chapter was touching.
Ross Becalick
10:01 pm | April 9, 2004
Sorry, most of you seem to have forgotten or aren't HBO veterans, but WADO was and still is the HBO equivilant of Jesus.

Sorry, but MadJackal has still got some writing to do to match what Wado did.
MadJackal
8:38 pm | April 9, 2004
I appreciate the praise, but I am not worthy of being compared with Jesus :)
He did something that none of us can match in significance. His love has saved the souls those of us that want to be saved. My writings only bring joy (I hope) to those that want to read them, they don't offer a new life and a fresh start to people, like Jesus's sacrifice did.
Anyway, I'd better stop rambling. Thanks for the comments guys! You readers are the best; I couldn't ask for a better audience. :D
The Razor
7:15 pm | April 9, 2004
The Jesus of halo,the best of the best, amazing and finally superb.`-
Horror
4:37 pm | April 9, 2004
Ironic, when I read your story the icon at the top right corner was the Halo Bible. Good story man good story.

Anywho, I have found myself exceedingly bored cause I only have two classes so... I've submitted part 5 of my series.
Ajax
10:53 pm | April 6, 2004
Not much else to say. That was the shizznit.
teemus
5:36 pm | April 6, 2004
Well Mad, looks your a hit. =P keep it up man!
Ross Becalick
5:13 pm | April 6, 2004
Wow, the word 'MadJackel' is a real comment magnet! ;)

This was great, I think I missed some of them; so I'll print of the series and read it while I'm pretending to revise for exams.

Great stuff.
Pooman
11:33 am | April 6, 2004
How could anonymous read the story in less than 60 second's? Lol
The Frenchman
5:31 am | April 6, 2004
The last sentence...is there a hint of a forgotten sister that begins another rebellion? :P

50/10, the only Fan Fic I ever bothered to read, the best of all.
MadJackal
2:02 am | April 6, 2004
Thanks guys. I really appreciate you all taking the time to read my series. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it, as that has always been my goal.
And Stacey, you have no hope of beating me at Halo. After I crush you, you will not be full of such bravado. :P
Koop117
1:10 am | April 6, 2004
This series was amazing! The ending wrapped everything completely up. I see a future author in the making.
Anonymous
10:59 pm | April 5, 2004
Last part, I can't beleive it. HAven't read the story yet. I'm glad you finished this series.
Anonymous
10:59 pm | April 5, 2004
Damn traitor, that was a nice story to conclude the series. Wonderful ending,
Agent Shade
8:56 pm | April 5, 2004
lol, to quote my fellow fan fic readers...

THIS ROCKED!

'Nuff said
Stacey
8:29 pm | April 5, 2004
WOW, Mad. That was amazing. You're the best! Soka died...trademark MadJackal ending. But still a wonderful fic. That was the greatest plot ever. You, my friend, have a brilliant mind.
...so you think you've already won the war, eh? Well. We can settle this NEXT WEEK. SPRING BREAK!! Woooohooo! I'll see you THERE. Mwahaha...
Pooman
7:37 pm | April 5, 2004
Yes, this book was VERY good for a fan fiction. 10/10. For me to rate a story that, well, it's like hell freezing over. :) i hope to see more from you later on the line. MadJackal+Fan fiction= beautiful work.
D4rj0n7
7:10 pm | April 5, 2004
been following this series with great intrest, perfect ending. Excellent work MadJackal.
Sid
6:16 pm | April 5, 2004
I enjoyed the entire series a lot. A job well done! Congratulations!!!
Cerium
5:24 pm | April 5, 2004
Great... If you write more stories i will definatly read them. wow...
Cerium
5:24 pm | April 5, 2004
Great... If you write more stories i will definatly read them. wow...
System Failure
5:18 pm | April 5, 2004
Nice stuf there. I wish I could wite like that, man. Perfect series, this is some nice stuuf you got there.
teemus
5:06 pm | April 5, 2004
I...umm....n...grea...perfe...

WOW, THAT WAS AWSOME!
FOrunnER
4:28 pm | April 5, 2004
Very nice. Loved the sword action, Ruka's betrayal, all of it made gave the story new dimensions. Very well done.
Awacar
3:30 pm | April 5, 2004
I'm too shocked/awed for words.
Sentinel
2:22 pm | April 5, 2004
I could never give a rating for this story, or even this series. It's too far off the scale.
Helljumper
2:11 pm | April 5, 2004
YOu are the man, that was the illest fanfic i've ever read. Perfect 20/10. Thats all i can say.this needs to be a book

ODST
CoLd BlooDed
1:53 pm | April 5, 2004
A beautiful ending to an awesome series, I knew Soka would die, but it was up to the author how.

Great job, MadJackal, I hope to see more series of this calibur from you.

(WOOO! FIRST COMMENT!)


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