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Comments for 'The Iron Hands of the Prophets (Part 1)'

2:40 pm | March 28, 2004
I still think that he the leader sould have had platinum/gold armor, but that's just me. No, i see that you didn't change it much from the preview you gave me, but i think you could've made it into a novel.
6:36 am | March 11, 2004
yeah i'm starting on the 3rd right now, the 2nd was fantastic, and i'm expecting great things after the 3rd one too:D lol dont worry about that name man:P it doesn't matter, i've really gotta finish off that series, i'll have time in the next week to get started on number 7, have you read my poem lol? hehe anyways, i'm gonna read numba 3:)
11:59 pm | March 8, 2004
Oh, wow, you're right! Oops! It's been so long that I forgot that the planet in yours was named the same thing. I meant it to be symbolic as to the dramatic upturning of the main character's life that happen in that planet's system (much like the Covenant Cruiser Invisible Truth's name is symbolic). Oh well, since I read your series a while back, the name was probably sitting in the back of my head and that's why it came to me so easily. Oh well, ignore it if you must. Have you read the new parts yet?
8:46 am | March 8, 2004
this is a fantastic story yet again:D however Mad, *points to his own stories* where did you happen to get the name New Beggining? :P hehe
3:20 am | March 5, 2004
Wow. Not very many fanfics catch my attention like this one. I'm looking forward to the rest of your series.
2:51 am | March 5, 2004
I am experimenting with many new techniques in this series. I will discuss them further on the comments page of the last part once it is released. I am experimenting with things like direct characterization instead of indirect and so on. Also, I made the parts shorter than you might be used to from me because I wanted to see if more people would read them if they were shorter (quicker, if you have as little time as me for this). Also, there are not that many parts in this series. There are only eight (I only had a limited window of opportunity to write this series because of the God-sent snow holliday, my next opportunity will be during spring break in my school system :( )
CoLd BlooDed
1:18 am | March 5, 2004
Never do short chapters.
The Collector
11:37 pm | March 4, 2004
Guy?!?! Guy?!?! Damn nooooooooooo U crushed my dream *Sob* *Sniff* *Sob* lol Well Guy it is very good. Question Hopefully someone can tell how much is 2 much? 15 long chapters or 32 short ones... Hmmmm...
10:57 pm | March 4, 2004
I'll finish FB soon. I just have to find the free time to read some fan fictions. Oh, and Collector, it's guy. :)
CoLd BlooDed
7:20 pm | March 4, 2004
Have you finished the Forced Betrayal series? :D
5:57 am | March 4, 2004
Actually, every part has more and more action until the final two, which are some of the more exciting combat scenes that I have ever written (I'd better stop before I give the whole series away:) ).
The Collector
4:02 am | March 4, 2004
Wow not a bad lead in into a very possible exciting new series. More action, more description and more "feelings" lol Very good guy/girl
9:33 pm | March 3, 2004
good solid story. looking forward to seeing part 2
CoLd BlooDed
4:00 am | March 3, 2004
I see, well, keep it up. :D
3:38 am | March 3, 2004
You may be right that I did a better job on characters' emotions in my other stories, but just stick with this series. I'm not going to go back and change the other parts since I've already written them and am satisfied, but I'm sure that this series has plenty to deliver. Trust me.
As for Specters, I will finish it, I promise. There was a problem though, because the story was going to end on Reach, but I recently read First Strike and it just ruined my whole ending idea, so I will have to rework it when I find the time.
Lone Wolf
1:45 am | March 3, 2004
I hate to disagree, however I have to, the story isn't horrible, but man where is the emotion, the flare that sets these stories apart, don't just go along monotone and talk constantly in a past tense.
CoLd BlooDed
1:14 am | March 3, 2004
Alright, I read it, and I love your writing style and description, it is very proffesional. Keep it up, Mad!

You should really try writing from a Human's point of view. I'd be happy to do a joint series with you! :D

P.S - Whatever happened to the series you started before?
11:28 pm | March 2, 2004
Awsome story
11:08 pm | March 2, 2004
Thanks for the comments. I have in fact already written the entire series, but I am simply waiting to post each part periodically (The Iron Hands of the Prophets(Part 2): Secrets should come out as soon as my internet gets back up, as I am typing this from another computer). Oh, and I forgot to post this part's title *kicks himself.* It is The Iron Hands of the Prophets (Part 1): Fate. I left off Fate. Anyways, I'll sit and pray that my computer will fix itself so that I can post Part 2.
9:17 pm | March 2, 2004
8:39 pm | March 2, 2004
Nice idea man, it got my attention! Original idea, and i made alot of connections. Keep up the good work.
8:35 pm | March 2, 2004
I wanna see where this is going..
CoLd BlooDed
3:49 pm | March 2, 2004
I...I think my story is longer than yours! Imagine that! :P

Oh, and I'll read your story once I get back from school, it sounds sweet.