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Comments for 'The Brethren of Saturn, Chap. 3 - Deployment And Assault' |
Archangels Blade
10:42 pm | July 1, 2002
it's good, but your story IS a little choppy. You've gotta spend more time between this and the next chapter to get all the ideas you want in. Otherwise, it's good and creative, with a great storyline - just the way i like 'em!
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Spartan415
9:41 pm | June 30, 2002
bit of time between chapters and put more into the story.
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Myself
7:55 pm | June 28, 2002
Read it, like it, post it. Go code, duck.
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