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Comments for 'The Brethren of Saturn, Chap. 1 - Direction of the Platform'



(the real)Mr. Radi
10:21 pm | June 20, 2002
I think Mr. Radi should be the leader, but it is your fic. and it was cool.I underestimated you, Lots of people liked it. Sounds like it can be big. PS i see that you use lots of variation (instead of just halo), but I think it needs more variation. but it sounds cool so far.
Archangels Blade
2:36 pm | June 12, 2002
Coming along very well! Keep up the good work, and get the next part out soon!
Jaywhit10
1:57 am | June 10, 2002
Very good story i like it. I can't wait for the next part to come out. Very Nice
Myself
6:36 pm | June 9, 2002
Read it, Like it, Post itThanks for reading....To be continued....


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