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Comments for 'Halo: The Scythe of Death Part Eight'

4:47 pm | February 27, 2004
More to read, but it is ok. Cause it is good. I'll have to pay attention to soak up more Mil. stuff.

The Collector
3:31 am | February 27, 2004
huh... Very good... Now how come it didnt flow rite?
MC's Cousin
11:57 am | February 26, 2004
Good good. I like. Though the one thing that almost made me stop reading is the flow aspect. You have a little too much repetitiveness in their and not enough smooth sentence structure. But it was still pretty good.

Signing Off

Agent Shade
7:48 pm | February 25, 2004
*standing ovation* good to have this story back. your military knowledge is extremely impressive, and is turning this story into another mastepiece. keep writing, well done
4:32 pm | February 25, 2004
Back by popular demand! Please post your thoughts.